英語 中学生 約1年前

英検準2級ライティング 採点お願い致します🙇‍♀️ お題は生徒はもっとコンピューターを使う時間を持つべきかです

I want TO do some volunteer work I think so. I have two reasons. First, they can watch movies abouts education. For example, how to grown flower how to read English and so on. Second, they are able to use many computers 7 I think it helps their future. Therefore I believe students ought to have more time to use computers.

英語 中学生 約6年前

答えは2です。どうしてそうなるのか教えて頂けると嬉しいです。

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