英語 高校生 1年以上前

英検2級のWritingです。採点お願いします。

以下のTOPICについて, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ●POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし, これら以外の観点から理由 を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語 ~ 100語です。 sminson they ond blovA & TOPIC might be tud ball A These days, some people spend a lot of money on their pets. Do you think more people will do so in the future? POINTS ●Health ●Pet service ●Cost difrodephos,

英語 高校生 約2年前

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