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I'm going to talk about an experience that changed my life Was when I studied studying abroad in Niseko, Hokkaido. I stayed for a total of 2 months last summer I made a lot of friends. and this summer. Speaking in both Japanese and English deepened our bond. Even after studying abroad we l are still in touch. We are going to have a reunion in Tokyo on Christmas Actually, I hadn't been good at English before I studied abroad. A friend of mine said "Don't be afraid ". Then to me •get rid of my weakness in English. I had a conversation with my I was able to native teacher in English through the activitities. In these activities, had a We did BBQ, cooked, and went sightseeing. It was d again, I would like to go skiing. lot of fun. If I could study abroad in Niseko to Niseko. You can enjoy Niseko's lifestyle Please yo m

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ON A. Circle the correct words to complete the paragraph below. is there life on other planets? Scientists use different methods to try to answer this question. Some use very 'powerful / whole radio telescopes. They hope to receive messages from intelligent life on distant planets. Other scientists only 2search/ contact for life in our solar system. But they aren't looking for intelligent life-they want to ³ circle / identify any possible life forms. To do this, they test whether conditions on a planet would allow / contact any kind of life to 5 exist / search.

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B. Complete the paragraph with words from the box. connection damaged improved normally sharp 1 2 In his book Musicophilia, brain scientist Dr. Oliver Sacks looked at the between music and the brain. He wrote about how music the lives of musicians, hospital patients, and ordinary people. Dr. Sacks also shared the experiences of different people. He gave an example of a man by a lightning strike, which-strangely-left whose brain was 3 him wishing to become a musician at age 42. Another interesting example was of a man whose memory 4 lasted only seven seconds, except when he listened to music. When this happened, his mind became very 5- with a near-perfect memory.

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Lesson 3. Palliative Care 部突破! いま最もアツく、最もイカ Medical treatment / Health STEP P 1 Read the Article Let's learn about palliative care, medical care that relieves pain, symptoms and stress caused by serious illness. 1) Palliative care, form of health care that seeks to improve the quality of life of patients with terminal disease through the prevention and relief of suffering. It is facilitated by the early identification of life-threatening disease and by the treatment of pain and disease- associated problems, including those that are physical, psychological, social, or spiritual in nature. As defined, palliative care begins at the point of diagnosis of terminal disease and can be delivered in a variety of health care settings. In general, it involves health and social care professionals working in hospitals, communities, hospices, and voluntary sectors. 2) Palliative care has been associated with many different terms, including terminal care, care of the dying, end-of-life care, and supportive care. However, these forms of care are not necessarily the same as palliative care. Likewise, palliative care is also sometimes described as hospice care. While hospice care does imply palliative care, it is specific to care provided near the end of life. In contrast, palliative care covers the duration of a patient's illness and, hence, may be delivered over the course of years. 3) Palliative care emphasizes three main principles: 1) A team-based approach is fundamental in managing distressing symptoms, such as pain, nausea, fatigue, and depression. It is also a necessary component in meeting the physical and psychosocial needs of the patient and his or her family. 2) Dying is a normal process. Symptom management is needed in order to help patients live life to the fullest until they die. 3) The synthesis of physical care with psychological and spiritual care fulfills a vital role in the overall care of the patient. 4) Palliative care is a global concern, and a steady rise in the number of people who are living longer with degenerative disease suggests that demand for palliative care services will increase in the are areas of intense. developments such Standards Framewo and Palliative Care Indian Association health care profes intended to help physical and psyc 5) In some place For example, the and has identifie framework is int days of life. Its communication, their families, a palliative c diagnosis duration: nausea H Log in to Watch th Hear resear the 2020 co

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A. Complete the paragraph with words from the box. One word is used twice. beat energy range seems steady Much of the research done on music and exercise focuses on what the ideal BPM is for running. But it also 2 studies that having a predictable, 3 music with sudden changes in the 4- from recent rhythm is important. Generally, like free-form jazz, is less suitable. Why? If the music speed changes while we run, we tend to adjust our movements to match the 5 Each time we change our steps to move faster or slower, we lose 6

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〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

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believe that something is true B. Complete the paragraph with items from the box. Two items are extra. astronaut conduct consider launched limited to planet resulted in so far technology the time being missions trip People have been interested in the planet Mars since ancient times. Because of the distance of Mars from Earth, sending a rocket to the (1) today. For (2) is not possible exploration of Mars is (3) unmanned spaceships. There have been several spaceships which have made the (4) and sent photos back to Earth, but (5) on the surface. The most famous of these (6) which was (7) was like a robot car, was able to (8) stopped working. to Mars only a few have actually landed was the Mars Pathfinder, in 1996 and landed on Mars in 1997. The Pathfinder, which a lot of useful research before it Some people (9) that space exploration and sending spaceships to other planets to be a waste of money. However, others think that the (10) is created, and the information that is learned, is good for all people. Review 16 - 20 91

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A. Circle the correct answer for each question. likely to be jealous of someone. 1. You are more 2. Which do many people decorate at Christmas time? 3. Which are people more accustomed to? a. rich a. a feast b. a tree a. spending money b. receiving awards a. an empire b. a rifle a. an insect b. water a. help it b. ruin it 6. What would profit do for a business? a. excited b. confused 7. Which would people rather be? a. a contract b. a feast 8. Which would you invite friends to share with you? a. a recruit b. a contract 9. Which would you sign? a. being punished b. getting a reward 10. Which would few people enjoy? B. Complete the paragraph with items from the box. Two items are extra. Which of these is a weapon? 4. 5. Which of these flows? discovered resembled establishing rights faced status by Roy's s grief the rest of Many people change countries during their life, but one man has (1) (2) son and (10) heir took over This surprised people in the UK, who believed they had the (5) . Bates and (6) to leave the platform. However, Roy (8). in the sea to contain (3) that would be used to fight off invaders. After the war, the soldiers left these platforms and they were forgotten - until 1967. In that year, a British man, Roy Bates, one of the platforms and announced he had started his own country, (4) called Sealand. b. poor himself by his own country. During World War II, the UK built a number of artificial platforms made a name for weapons the people on the island (his family), (7) In 1968, a court decided that the UK had no power over Sealand. Just like other places with the that the platform was in international waters. to the platform. orders of a country, Sealand, has its own stamps, coins, and passports. It is controlled 'Prince' Michael, and is home to a large Internet business. 11 15 69

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Circle the correct answer for each question. A. likely to be jealous of someone 1. You are more 2. Which do many people decorate at Christmas time? 3. Which are people more accustomed to? 4. Which of these is a weapon? 5. Which of these flows? a. rich b. poor a. a feast b. a tree a. spending money b. receiving awards b. a rifle b. water b. ruin it b. confused b. a feast b. a contract a. a recruit a. being punished b. getting a reward B. Complete the paragraph with items from the box. Two items are extra. 6. What would profit do for a business? 7. Which would people rather be? 8. Which would you invite friends to share with you? 9. Which would you sign? 10. Which would few people enjoy? discovered resembled establishing rights faced status a. an empire a. an insect a. help it a. excited a. a contract grief the rest of (9) by Roy's son and (10) heir took over Many people change countries during their life, but one man has (1) (2) himself by his own country. During World War II, the UK built a number of artificial platforms in the sea to contain (3) that would be used to fight off invaders. After the war, the soldiers left these platforms and they were forgotten - until 1967. In that year, a British man, Roy Bates, (4) one of the platforms and announced he had started his own country, called Sealand. This surprised people in the UK, who believed they had the (5) - Bates and (6) to leave the platform. However, Roy (8). made a name for weapons to the platform. orders In 1968, a court decided that the UK had no power over Sealand. Just like other places with the that the platform was in international waters. of a country, Sealand, has its own stamps, coins, and passports. It is controlled 'Prince' Michael, and is home to a large Internet business. the people on the island (his family), (7) in 11 - 15 69