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次のTopic について、自分の意見とその理由を50 語程度の英文で書きなさい。 Topic :If you had an "Anywhere Door", where would you go? Topic 2: If you could travel in a time machine, when would you go to? Topic 3: Do you think more people will have pets in the future? 55 ☺ If I could travel in a time machine, I want to go to Heian Period. I have two reasons. First. I can watch Helankya. Sei Shenagon and Murasaki Shikibu. I like their essay. so I want to talk with them. For this reason. I want to go to Helan Period 54歳 0 If I had an Second. I want to meet "Anywhere Door", I want to go to Shizuoka. I have two reasons. First I want to eat Local gourment food like Fuzimiya-yakicabo, Second I want to watch the volley match of Hamamatushugakusha high school. But I haven't enough many to ge So I want to go to Shizuoka with anywhere door. ☺ I think more people will have pets in the future. It's because having And having pets make children's pets is good for education. emotions enriching. Also, pet helps relieve children's loneliness. So I think more people will have pete in the future Check! □自分の意見や考えを最初に述べているか。 □その理由を述べているか 理由に対する具体的な事例・事実を述べているか ( つなぎ言葉を効果的に使っているか。 □単語・文法の誤りはないか。 ) words

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BAJAX- • Write an essay on the given TOPIC. • Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. 4 • Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words • Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of you answer sheet. Any writing outside the space will not be graded. epion TOPICsoria-algte is refpee poltron € 189 Is it beneficial for workers to change jobs often? of yllutoisa netail.l Resche Come back to Speak with his secretary, om POINTS Career goals CO • Motivation • The economy Working conditions The $1169 brachtibotliwon2 I obind or awond vloed o2 S dagnakap masligouldauechubserleri Kain a theq I ok

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小学校でオンライン授業を実施すべきか、対面授業を実施すべきか。 I think that elementary schools had better face-to-face classes. than reasons. First face to face classes give to talk with others This opportunities leads to make communication ability friends and learns It important for dementary students to know that there people who have thinking different from me through Conversation face to face classes -taking online lessons at home should continue to to Second students need to + give Go online lessons for Date hold for the following chances outside to are face-to-four lessons a fo to it is better for their health than go Therefore, elementary schools before.

文法問題で誤っているものを選ぶのですがどれが正解か分からないので教えて頂きたいです。

<誤っているものを1つ> (a) This is the house my father lived in his childhood. (b) She broke her leg the day she got married. (c) The essay you thought was written by Tim was in fact written by me.

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I disagree that Big companies u have a positive effect on society. I have two reasons. I 4 the environment to producet Large-scale products. Big company mode a lot of products , so they use maturials such as water, electric and gos@ Also, they discharge carbou dioxide. By doing so, global warming will be increasing. Seally worker is difficult to protect @ Nork-life balance. Big companies ask them for many job iro home go they will go @ a at late night. Also some poode have to move their house for working. They will lose their free time, and tell.. tired. Therefore, big companien have a lot of pod points. I think people should work widdle or small companies than big companies, and goople will C C

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シャーペンで印のついているhaveの働きを教えてください。 完了形だったらhelpが過去分詞になると思うのですが、 よろしくお願いします。

Model Essay 2F 名詞を修飾する ② 将来, ロボットが行うと思われることがいくつかあります。 第一に, ロボットにお年寄りの介護を手伝ってもらうでしょう。 ロボットはカ 強く, お年寄りの日々の介助ができます。 第二に, 農家の代わり に十分である をするロボットを入手するでしょう。 そのようなロボットは日本の 労働力不足を補う助けとなるでしょう。 There are a few things that I think robots will do in the future. Firstly, we will have robots help us take care of the elderly. Robots are powerful enough to assist them in daily care. Secondly, we will get robots which can take the place of farmers. Such robots will help to make up for Japan's labor shortage. (57 words) [ OXO コ

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No. Date 24 S4 ① Why does Sesame Street focus on social issues ? (なぜセサミストリートは社会問題に焦点を当てているのでしょうか?) The answer is related to US history. (答えはアメリカの歴史に関係しています。) Sesume Street started in the US in 1969. (セサミストリートは1969年にアメリカで始まりました。) At that time, the civil rights movement was taking place. (当時は公民権運動が起こっていました。) ⑥ People were fighting to gain equal rights for all races. (人々はあらゆる人種の平等な権利を獲得するために戦っていました。) ⑥ On Sesume Street, humans and monsters of various shapes, sizes, colors, and personalities live together. (セサミストリートでは、さまざま形、大きさ、色、性格を持つ人間とモンスターが一緒に暮らしています。) ⑦ Their diversity shows a world where different people live in harmony. (彼らの多様性は、さまざまな人々が調和して暮らす世界を示しています。) ⑧ Through these characters, children learn how to get along in society. (これらのキャラクターを通じて、子どもたちは社会でうまくやっていく方法を学びます。) ⑨ The characters also help children devclop their inclusive views on people around the world. (また、キャラクターは、子どもたちが世界中の人々に対する包括的な見方を育むのにも役立ちます。) ⑩ Creating a society like Sesame Street is still a work in progress, (セサミストリートのような社会を築くのはまだ途上です。)等くも実現 ① The program continues to send important messages to the world: diversity, equity, and inclusion. (この番組は、多様性、公平性、包括性といった重要なメッセージを世界に発信し続けています。)

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銀塩一 • Write an essay on the given TOPIC. • Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. 4 • Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion • Suggested length: 120-150 words • Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of yo answer sheet. Any writing outside the space will not be graded. th69 $ 169 to adjust to her new job. Bolteon & vat 150 the Me TOPIC & feq Is it beneficial for workers to change jobs often? of yliutenso netale 1 Reschedule the the appointmen Come back tomorrOY Speak with his secretary. comprispiel beach that liv, od 2 I obind di awon yiod od S achbodegrabequemadout the noise. The manligaldauod rosszis 9/12 A POINTS ● Bolo ● Career goals Motivation • The economy Working conditions this I

なぜbeing clearerでもっと明確化するとという訳になるのでしょうか？ あと、help O doでOが～するのを助けるという意味なのになぜ役立つと訳しているのでしょうか？

英文図解 〈3〉 Being clearer will help you write a better essay. VO C S help が help OCの第5文型をとります。 you が0.write a better essay が C です。 和訳 もっと明確化すると、 あなたがよりよい論文を書くのに役立 つだろう。