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III brand. 5. Present an ad showing how unique and original the brand is right after viewers have watched a scary film. Answer in a short essay between 120 and 150 words in English. The full score for this essay is 20 points. Newspapers and news programs frequently report negative events. There are some people who think that it would be better if more good news was reported. What is your opinion? Explain your opinion and give at least two reasons to support it.

英語です had an urgent matter to attend to が答えなのですが、 had to attend to an urgent matter だとどこが間違えているのですか？

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22年度第1回筆訂 4 Write an ssay given TOPIC. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. .Suggested length: 120-150 words answer sheet. Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your Any writing outside the space will not be graded. TOPIC Should people's salaries be based on their job performance? POINTS ⚫Age Spend 2 Go fishin Company profits Motivation C . Skills 3 K 生産性が上がる→会社の利益につながる 多くのお金を得る。 barinqon gni 社員とする→お金をもらうため。 1 Her 2 Her 3. She borilep Show and worker IS E スキルをもつため。 TI by 1990sm or so of togiot H S No. 11 1 Shanti soli jon bib ogni giring. E.M

Do you think traveling by train is better than traveling by car? という問いに対しての返答としてこの文章は適切でしょうか。 英文学作るのがとても苦手なので単語の使い方などの文法重視でお願いします🙇 字が丁寧... 続きを読む

traveling by train is better I think that than traveling by cat, I have two reasons. First, it makes travel easier and more confortable.) (31) For example, they need not drive car. Second, it really improves the quality of travel in many ways.(+2) That is because train is farster than car. (50)

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Unfortunately, many of the soldiers' letters were never delivered to the mainland. On February 19, the US Forces started to invade the island. After fighting from underground shelters for a month, almost all of Kuribayashi's soldiers were killed. About five months later, World War II ended. After the war, some letters were returned to Japan from the US. They had been taken from Iwoto by the American soldiers. The following is one such letter. Sadly, the family members of the writer have not been found yet. Father, Mother, Torao, Kei, Eizo, Tadashi, Otaka, Sueharu, Tatsumi, Fumiko, and Tatsuko. I would like to wish you all good health and a long life. Father and Mother, please take good care of yourselves as you are getting older.

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14 空所(1)~(7) に入る語を語群 A~Lから選び、 記号で答えなさい。 ただし、 同じ記号は使えないも のとする。 Food is important for life because it gives us energy and brings people together. Many traditional dishes, (1) are passed down through generations, show the culture of a place. Sushi, for example, comes from Japan and is made with rice and fish or vegetables, which taste great together. Some people like food from other countries (2) others prefer simple comfort food that reminds de them of home. These foods make us feel good and bring back happy memories, but (3) the world valo becomes more connected, local food traditions may disappear (4) they are preserved. Fast food is easy to get, but it doesn't have as many healthy ingredients as home-cooked meals. That's (5) experts suggest eating more fruits and vegetables, which are good for our health. Cooking can also be fun and creative, letting people try new things. Food is something (6) connects everyone (7) they are from. S 語群 A. who B. which C. that D. why E. how F. whose G. whoever A. H. whatever ✗wherever J. as K. unless L. while

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