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6 CD Chacal the 1 Choose the best answer to fill in the blanks. (1) (1) ( ) the editor of this magazine? ①Do you know is who 3 Who do you know is 2 Do you know who is Who is do you know (関西 (2) Please keep your eyes ( 1 close 2 closing ) until I tell you to open them. 3 closed 4 to close (京 (3) One of the twins lives in Tokyo, but ( ) lives in New York. ①another 2 other 3 the other 4 the others (4) There is not much hope ( 1 as 2 how ) they are still alive. 3 that 4 which (5) The language ( ①speaking (6) He ( 1 should ) in the province is Arabic. 3 spoke 2 speak ) be sick. I just saw him playing soccer. ③ can't ④spoken (月 (7) It will not be long 1 before 2 may ) we meet again. 3 above 2 on ④ won't SET ④during (8) Tom may not have studied ( 2 as hard ①enough hard (9) There are many books worth ( ) to pass the entrance examination. 3 hard enough 4 hard as ) more than once. 3 reading to be read 1 read 2 to read (10) James found ( ①him ) difficult to write down foreign names. 2 himself 3 it ④them (11) They suggested that he ( ) to the meeting. 1 come 2 comes (3) came 4 had come (12) Hurry up! Our bus is leaving ( ) a few minutes. I till 2 on 3 during 4 in (13) You will miss the train ( ) you walk more quickly. 1 if (14)( How about 2 without 3 unless ) take the train instead of the bus? It's faster. ②Let's 3 Why don't ④but for ④Why not

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Household Food Waste (45%) Industrial Food Waste -Food Manufacturing Industry (21%) Food Waste Min Japan 6.4 Milion Tona Food Wholesale Business (3%) -Food Retail (10%) (参考) Restaurant Industry (21%) 英語 C Lesson4 より 1. Why do you think so much food is thrown out? Give two reasons. 2. What should each of us do to reduce food loss and waste ? Answer the questions above in 60-80 words. 書き出し→Japan throws out more than 6 million tons of edible food every year. This is the same amount as if every Japanese threw out one bowl of rice every day. これに続くように書くこと(ここからカウント/下線部は印刷されている) 実施日: 学年末考査後最初の授業内に10分で実施します。 評価基準 語数 / 情報の活用 (各教科担当の先生から連絡) 文法・語彙 構成内容の展開 A 60~80語で書いており、且つ 学習した内容を活用しなが 情報や考えを読み手に伝 わるように工夫して書いて いる。 語数の指示に従っていない。 B または学習した内容の活用 や、読み手に伝わるような工 夫がある程度できている。 語数が著しく不足している。 C または必要な情報や考えが 不足していて内容がまとま っていない。 致命的な文法・語法の問いに対する理由2つおよび自分の考え ミスがない。 を述べ、それぞれに対する補足説明等を書 語彙のミスは2つ以いている。 内である。 文法・語法のミスが2 文以内である。 語彙のミスは5つ以する補足説明等を書いている。 内である。 文法・語法のミスが3問いに対する答えが書かれていないか、 1 文以上である。 つしか書いていない。 または補足説明等が 同じフレーズの繰り返しがほとんどない。 問いに対する理由2つおよび自分の考え のうち1つ不足しているが、 それぞれに対 同じフレーズの繰り返しがやや多い。 語彙のミスが6つ以ない。 上である。 同じフレーズの繰り返しが多い。 英語E 教科書 p. 50-51 および英語 C Lesson4 を参考にして、自分の考えを英語で書け るようにしよう。

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entrance to a canyon in a desert in the Middle East. He IO rocky floor through the long canyon. When he finally came out into the open air, he could not believe his eyes. The high rose-red wall where a magnificent structure was sculpted was rising up above him.

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Friendship is above *reason, for, though we find good points in our friends, they were our friends before we find them. a)To give friendship as a reward for *goodness would be to set a price on it, and those who do that have no friendship to give. If we choose our friends because they have good points, b) we are ( 7 ) nearer to true friendship (1) if we choose them because they have money. *reason goodness よい点 ①下線部a) を日本語に訳しなさい。 OF12 ② 前後の文脈に注意し, 下線部b) の (ア), (イ)に入る語を下から選びなさい。 OF13 (ア) (イ) as, far, few, more, much, no, than

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重要 解答時間 25分 (解答・解説 P.200 ~2011 (3) Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Agree or disagree: Personal finance should be taught in school POINTS Risk of debt Balance of classes Financial responsibility ●Learning at home

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(2) Write an essay on the given TOPIC. KIOT Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. ●Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words 081-021 4 TOPIC Do you think print newspapers and magazines will disappear in the future? POINTS OSpeed of news ement Consumer preferences ●Cost effectiveness Health issues 大問4 英作文

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