英作文の添削をしてほしいです！🙇

の流れで文章をつくってみよう。 時間の流れにそってわかりやすく説明するために, and, after, before などの接続 使ってみよう。 I usually wake up at 5:50. First, I have a breakfast in the living room. After that, I brush my teeth. And I fix my hair before wearing high school ool uniform. Then, I usually leave for school at 6:40. OP 000

英検2級英作文 添削お願い致します🙇‍♀️

* I don't think so. I have two reasons. First, living with their family makes them happy because they can share their feelings. By doing so, they are able to relax and be fine. It is so amazing. Second, they can help them every day. It is a good opportunity to thank parents, Parents raise us hard When we are child. Now, it is a turn to help parents a lot. Therefore, I believe many young people live with their parents and help them.

至急🏃💦💨現在完了形の疑問文をつくって長文日記を書くという課題が出されました。たとえばどのように書けばいいでしょうか？

I have lived in japan for five years.と　I have been reeding a book since 10 a.m.のbeenを使う時と使わない時ってどういう違いがあるからなんですか？使い分けを教えて欲しいです！

現在完了形ではどういう場合にbeenをつけるのでしょうか？

（1）（3）〜（6）教えてください

2 次の英文を読んで,あとの各問いに答えなさい。 Nancy and Saori are fifteen years old. Nancy came to Japan from New York last week. They are *neighbors. (1) Yesterday Saori invited Nancy to a welcome party. When Nancy came to Saori's home, Saori's mother said, We are going to have a party for you.” “Hi, Nancy. Today I'm going to 5 make sushi,” said Saori's father. Then Saori asked, “Do you like sushi?” “Yes, I like it very much, " Nancy answered. Then Saori's father went to the kitchen with Saori's mother to make sushi. Nancy and Saori went to the *living room and enjoyed ② (talk). Nancy asked Saori, “I have never made sushi *myself. “No, it's easy. Let's try next time,” said Saori. (3) An hour later, Saori's mother (to / to / told / come / the table / Nancy and Saori). When they *were ready to eat, Saori said something. “What did you say?" Nancy asked. “I said, Itadakimasu. We say it before eating.” Nancy said, “What does it mean?” Saori thought for a while and said, “*Maybe it means 'I will eat it.' It's an *expression to use before eating.” “Is there an expression to use (⑤) eating?” “Yes, Nancy. It's 'Gochisosama. It means ‘It was good food,' I think.” “Oh, I see. I've just learned two new Japanese expressions." Then Nancy said, “Itadakimasu,” and started 15⑥(eat). 10 〔注〕 neighbor 隣人 living room 居間 myself 私自身で ~ be ready to 〜 〜する準備ができている maybe たぶん expression 表現、語句 ① に適する文をア~エから選び, 記号で答えなさい。 (1) ア You are welcome. イ Nice to meet you. ウ Excuse me. (2) ②, ⑥の()内の動詞を,適する形 (1語) になおして書きなさい。 ② talking ⑥ eating (6) (3) 話の流れに合うように, ③に適する疑問文を書きなさい。 I I'm sorry. ( ) 8 (4) 下線部④が意味の通る正しい英文になるように,( )内の語句を並べかえなさい。 An hour later, Saori's mother (5) (⑤) に a で始まる適する1語を書きなさい。 (6) 本文の内容と合うように、次の問いに3語の英文で答えなさい。 Was this the first time for Nancy to eat sushi? SOMNB ******* et aid?

③はat first になるんですけどどうやってとけばいいんでしょうか?なにか方法があれば教えて欲しいです

結化(Yuka), リリ 九里(M. Greenの英語の授業で発表を行いました。 発表を聞いたクリー ン先生は, 結花さんの発表についてコメントを書きました。 【 結花さんの発表】 【グリーン先生のコメント を読んで,後の1から8までの各問いに答えなさい。 sog vin 【結花さんの発表】 He Many people in Shiga have worked as volunteers. My grandfather is one of them. worked as a junior high school math teacher for many years and retired five years ago. He has worked as a volunteer at the community center since then. Many children go there to play and study together after school and on weekends. He helps them ( 1 ) every day. He always says that working for other people makes him happy. His words made me interested in volunteer work. bon OR I became a high school student and wanted to try something new. So I did volunteer work at the community center this summer. Now, I will talk about my experiences. I hope my speech will give you a chance to think about volunteer work. During summer vacation, I visited the community center. The community center 【used / many /is/ people/byl living in my city. And the volunteers do a variety of work. My first volunteer work was to take care of elderly people. I played some games and talked with them in the morning. Mr. Sato, one of the elderly men, said to me, "I had a good time today. I live alone and don't have so many chances to talk to other people, especially to young people like you. So I enjoyed talking with you." I was happy to hear that. In the afternoon, I saw a little foreign girl in the playroom. She was drawing a picture alone. ), I hesitated to talk to her because of my English. Then I remembered Mr. Sato's words. So I went to the girl and said, "Hi, I'm Yuka. You are good at drawing pictures. [4]" She smiled and showed me her picture. Then she said, "I will give this picture to my Japanese friend for her birthday. I want to write 'Happy Birthday!' in Japanese on the picture. Can you teach me how to write it?" I was glad to hear that. I taught her how to write it in hiragana. She practiced many times and looked very happy when she saw the picture after she finally finished 5[write] her message in Japanese. Then she said to me, "Thank you for helping me!" Her big smile made me very happy. These experiences reminded me of my grandfather's words. Before doing volunteer work, I thought that helping other people was to make them happy. However, I realized that helping other people made me happy,) too. So we can [ 6 ]. Now I'm looking forward to doing volunteer work again during spring vacation. Thank you for listening. (注) volunteer(s): ボランティアをする人 retire: 退職する community center: E play : 遊ぶ hesitate : ためらう chance : playroom: 【グリーン先生のコメント】 Your speech was great. I'm glad that you learned an important thing. I do volunteer work, too. I visit the city library every Saturday. I help foreign people there. Some foreign people don't understand Japanese. So I help them borrow books. Do you like to read books? The staff members are looking for someone who can read books to children. If you are interested, why don't we visit it together this Saturday?

(2)がわかりません。答えはイなのですが、どうしてイなんですか？解説をお願いします🙇‍♀️

1 次の英文を読んで、あとの (1)~(3)の問いに答えなさい。 Did you know that a lot of people have difficulties in shopping? There are many old people who are too weak and can't walk for a long time. It's very difficult for them to go shopping every week because they can't walk or ride bikes to shops. So, their families want them to stop driving a car. If old people can't get fresh food at a shop for a long time, they will have health problems. In rural places, there aren't many shops near their homes. People can find only a few small shops that are too far away. If old people hope to buy many kinds of things they need, they have to go to bigger shops in bigger cities. But in some rural places, there aren't many trains and buses. So they don't have any means to get there for shopping alone. How about old people living in bigger cities? Cities usually have a lot of shops, but in some cities, people can't find many shops these days. This is because shopping malls are usually built in the suburbs, and the number of small shops *throughout the cities is getting (). So like in rural places, old people have to go shopping in places that are now far away from home. But for some, it's difficult. What can we do for those old people who have difficulties in shopping? Some *vendors carry a lot of products in their cars to rural places or the suburbs and sell them to people living there. If these people can go there every week, local people don't have to go shopping with difficulties. Also, shopping on the Internet is another good way to get things. But many old people have not used the Internet much, so they need other people's support. In the future, there will be more old people in Japan. *Even more people may have difficulties in shopping. So we should keep thinking about the problem. throughout [03 vendor 物を売る人 () means & the suburbs even~ さらに~ (1) 文中の@に次の3つの文を入れるとき, 最も適切な順になるよう符号を並べなさい。 7 You may think that they can go shopping by car. In Japan, the percentage of traffic accidents by old drivers has increased. But it's often dangerous for old people to drive cars. (2) 文中の()に入れるのに最も適切な語を次のア~エの中から1つ選び、 その符号を書きなさい。 7 higher smaller less I more (3) 本文の内容と合うものを次のア~オの中から2つ選び、 その符号を書きなさい。 7 If old people can't get fresh food at a shop for a long time, they will be sick. People living in rural places usually have some small shops near their houses. A lot of people in the suburbs like going shopping at shopping malls better than going shopping at small shops. I Some people carry products in their cars, and that is helpful for old people who have difficulties in shopping. The problem about shopping will be solved because old people have used the Internet a lot.

これで合ってますか？ 間違っていたら教えてください！

次の各組の英文がほぼ同じ意味になるように ( (1) He is a singer who is loved by everyone. He is a singer (that He is a singer (everyone )( likes ) everyone ( )( mother (2) The dinner which his mother cooked was very good. The dinner which (was )( cooked mother was very good. my The dinner ( (3) Do you know that girl with blue eyes? Do you know that girl who has (5) I have an aunt living in New York. I have an aunt (ives に適する語を入れなさい。 (4) Look at the boy reading a book under the tree. Look at the boy (that )( is )( likes ). )( cooked ) blue eyes? ). )( by in ) his ) was very good. ) reading a book under the tree. ) in New York.

この英文で書く質問が思いつきません… どういう質問を書けばいいか教えてください

D8 How long have you been ~ing? 8 「ずっと〜している」 を現在完了進行形で書き、 それ につながりのある文を書く。