【2】を添削して欲しいです🙏

書く、英作文 次の各問いに答えなさい。 1) 次の日本語を英語で表した文を完成させなさい。 「ざぶとん」はたたみの上にすわるために使われる日本のクッションです。 A zabuton is a Japanese cushion こみ used to sit on tatami mats. (注)tatami mat:たたみ 2) ざぶとん以外の日本のものを紹介する文を, (1)を参考にして, which を使って5語以上の英語で書きなさい。 2) (10点×2) tHat is eaten by /20 2) A Sushi isa Japanese food which' many people.

私の解答でどこが間違えているのか詳しく教えて下さると嬉しいです！

Q Today. mony people simply threw things away if they are bro ken. Do you think this trend will [ncrease will in the ttare? A、自分の解答 Some penele say thet that people who simply throw thinge (0 away will Tncreose in the taTare but I do not 20 think so. I have Two reasons.First, people are interested fo in recycling things. For exomple, thoe are many recyding boxs - af supermorket. Second, most pesple cnjey repairing old things. I 50 50 always tix samething and Sell them.It ig very exciting、 60 Recently I think that the namber af people like me 20 is Tncveaning recently.For these reaタれ5, I think people who simply 80 throw thin gs away will dicrease in the tatare.

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Jeday, mary Japanese peple wark in foreigy. counties. You think fhe rutmber of These pcople wlll A.自位の回為 Sone people say thet the numler of Japanese pegle who co work in toreign carntries will [ncrense in the tatare) bi 4do not think so, I have twc reasons. FirST, 1 think thet m0st Japaresc people want to live (n Japan because there are 40 e vay Sete. For esamole, Japarese tad l is tamans tor satた in the world. Second, it 3 60 very ditficoit to gpeak the language 9parken in the flace Worters need to 3udy abant larguage hard. For these reasar, I do hot think host Japanere peuple will wark oversensn Tn the oiture 143話)

上の質問に対して80-100語で答えるのですが、 私が作ったAnswerは大体何パーセント出来てると思いますか？ また、改善点などを教えて欲しいです。 お願いします。

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