英語
高校生

1枚目の写真のTask1を参考に Task2でメールの返信を考える問題です🙇‍♀️
2枚目に私が書いたものがあるので文法や単語ミスがないか添削してほしいです
3枚目に評価する時に先生がよく見てるところを貼ってるので参考にしていただけると幸いです
すみませんがよろしくお願いします🙇‍♀️

Task 1 Your friend is coming to visit. He has questions about shopping. Write his questions on the right. FROM: Hello! I can't wait to see you next month. I have a few questions about your country. I would like to go shopping during my visit. I need electronics, clothes, and books. to Wherecommend I go? What are the you cheapest places to To to buy these things? What are the most reliable places? Are there good sales in your country this time of year? Are the stores very crowded? Any advice would help 混雑 me a lot. Thanks! クラウド His questions Where should I go to buy some electronics, clothes, and books? what are the cheapest place to buy these things? (what are the most reliable places / Are there good sales in your country this time of year? Are the stores very crowded? Leo Task 2 Write a reply letter of 80-120 words. Use some of the words and phrases in the box below. 平日OK bargains/suggest/selection/price/convenient/sales/discounts/crowded
Unit 2 Dear Leo, I'm very happy that you're coming to visit me. The best place to buy electronic. is EDION. The store is just one step a way from my house, so it's convenien Also, the store regularly holds bargains. You can buy items at cheaper Prices than in other stores. Moreover, there is a shopping mall called Yume city near this store. Yume city has many shops where you can buy clothes and books. It you're able to visit on a weekday, I don't think it will be crowded. I recommend there two places. I hope you'll let me help you with your shopping. I look forward to seeing you. Regards, ().
Tips for better writing 1. 複文を避ける 2. 省略形を使わない 3. 否定ではなくI disagree with the idea. I think driving is not a good idea... 4. 短文で書きながら 「接続詞」 「スピーチマーカー」を使う (I don't think driving is a good idea...) 5. 受動態を避ける 6. 関係詞の使用は最小限にとどめる 7. シンプルに 8. 同じ単語の繰り返しを避ける

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