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Do you think it is a good idea for people to have a car?

No, I do not think so. I have two reasons. First, a car is very expensive. We can use trains, buses and so on.
Second, if more and more people use their cars, the environment will be worse. They release bad chemicals.
Therefore, I don’t think it's a good idea for people to have a car.