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No. DATE [4] Some of university, students: choose to join Joing T internships. has benefis, such as being able to know more about companies; and encouraging each other both during and after the it. On the other hand, they may not be able to understand the job. or may find it difficult to do well in their studies. 55 I

至急！ 最初の文が自分の回答です。 なにかつづり間違いや文法など間違い、またはどういう表現のほうが、書き方、内容のほうが良いなどありますか？ 問題やその答え、解説は掲載してます。 自信が持てません。誰かお願いします！

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1枚目の写真のTask1を参考に Task2でメールの返信を考える問題です🙇‍♀️ 2枚目に私が書いたものがあるので文法や単語ミスがないか添削してほしいです 3枚目に評価する時に先生がよく見てるところを貼ってるので参考にしていただけると幸いです すみませんがよろしくお願いし... 続きを読む

Task 1 Read the ad below. Underline the qualities that Jenna is looking for in a roommate. NEED A RESPONSIBLE ROOMMATE I'm a 20-year old female history student at CUNY. I'm looking for a tidy and friendly roommate to share a two-bedroom apartment near the university. The apartment has furniture, Internet, and cable TV. We'll share a bathroom and a living room. The available bedroom is large. The rent is $300 a month. The perfect roommate would also be a student. I have a small dog, so you have to like dogs. I also can't take any other pets. If you are a smoker, you MUST smoke on the balcony. I get along well with creative and knowledgeable people. I'm pretty talkative and would be happy to live with a similar person. Please send me an e-mail (jennabusybee@cunyemail.edu) and tell me about yourself. I would like to hear about your studies, personality, and why you would make a good roommate. Jenna Task 2 (00 Write an e-mail to Jenna (80-120 words). Tell her about yourself. The phrases below may help. responsible tidy knowageable pay the rent on time/clean up after myself all the time / know a lot of things / like to have a good conversation/your own description カンバセイション Creative, friendly TITELK

1枚目の写真のTask1を参考に Task2でメールの返信を考える問題です🙇‍♀️ 2枚目に私が書いたものがあるので文法や単語ミスがないか添削してほしいです 3枚目に評価する時に先生がよく見てるところを貼ってるので参考にしていただけると幸いです すみませんがよろしくお願いし... 続きを読む

Task 1 Your friend is coming to visit. He has questions about shopping. Write his questions on the right. FROM: Hello! I can't wait to see you next month. I have a few questions about your country. I would like to go shopping during my visit. I need electronics, clothes, and books. to Wherecommend I go? What are the you cheapest places to To to buy these things? What are the most reliable places? Are there good sales in your country this time of year? Are the stores very crowded? Any advice would help 混雑 me a lot. Thanks! クラウド His questions Where should I go to buy some electronics, clothes, and books? what are the cheapest place to buy these things? (what are the most reliable places / Are there good sales in your country this time of year? Are the stores very crowded? Leo Task 2 Write a reply letter of 80-120 words. Use some of the words and phrases in the box below. 平日OK bargains/suggest/selection/price/convenient/sales/discounts/crowded

１枚目の写真のTask1を参考にTask2でメールの返信を考える問題です。 ２枚目に私が書いたものがあるので文法や単語ミスがないか添削してほしいです🙇‍♀️ ３枚目に評価する時に先生がよく見てるところを貼ってるので参考にしていただけると幸いです すみませんがよろしくお願い... 続きを読む

Task 1 Read the announcement below and take some notes. Attention all Students! G A study abroad scholarship is available Kla 011273 for next year. It will cover fees and $12,000 in living expenses each year for 27012-2016 HE のどこの大学でも a two-year course at any university in 001873 ひがみかく the U.S. Students can apply by writing a letter to introduce themselves. The letter will include: 1. Why they need the scholarship pay for my tuition here. Why do you need the money? 478401 ↑ I barely have enough money to 1. 2. I'm concerned about running up too Support myse (How much. many) debt デット How will you use the money? 1. rent groceries 2. The deadline is June 23rd. 2. How they plan to use the money しめきり 3. transportation Task 2 Write a letter applying for the scholarship (80-120 words). Use some of the words and phrases in th box below. barely have enough money/ concerned about / running up debt / keep a tight budget / necessities/ rent/groceries/transportation

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University students often plan for their future careers by attending job fairs searching online for information about different kinds of work opportunities. here are other ways, too. Some of them choose to join short-term work ograms at companies called internships. These have some good points. Students will be able to know more about ompanies they are interested in, such as what kind of jobs there are and what nd of people are working there. Also, internships allow students to get to know her students. These students can encourage each other both during and after the ternship. On the other hand, if students choose to join very short internships, they ay not be able to understand the job they are doing before the internships end. Iso, students who take part in internships may find it difficult to do well in their udies.

下線部クの次のaccess〜の部分の訳で澄み切った空がなかなかない、という訳はどこからきているのか教えてください

thousand stars (カ) Milky Way galaxy, and the planets slowly making Today we live largely cut off from this spectacle, with smog and light pollution *obscuring our view of this *perpetual cosmic drama, the unfolding of which once seemed intimately connected to questions of both natural and social order. But if we want to see Mars as it appeared ancient humans, access to a clear night (ク) (キャ sky is only half of our problem. We also have to put ourselves in their minds. [ 1 ] We have seen the surface of the Sun, the landscapes of Mars, the atmospheres of Venus and even Jupiter. We've discovered moons around other planets, and have found icy ocean worlds among them. We've used modern physics (to *infer the existence of black holes, and have now even "seen" them (with powerful radio telescopes.) We know that stars are bright orbs powered by *thermonuclear fusion. We know that within the observable universe, many billions of them (a septillion, in fact, with twenty-four zeros) are packed into 170

カッコで囲んだとこの英文の1つ目のandからの訳がどうして2枚目のようになるのか教えてください。 2枚目のどんな疑問が重要か〜の次のとこからです

ample practices varied across time and place. The truth is that we about what preliterate societies knew or believed. But they left behind *. evidence of their attention to the movements of the Sun and the phases of the Moon. And we can be sure that whatever questions they asked of the heavens were very different from those that motivate space exploration today. (A) rotic othe In reality, the difference between ancient and modern knowledge systems is more qualitative than quantitative; it is not about how much is known, but about what questions are important and about the acceptable ways of asking and answering those questions. And while we may not easily be able to slip between our modern worldview and those of others, we can nonetheless attempt to do so by asking not what ancient people knew about the world, but what their questions were when they looked at it. If we do this in the case of Mars, examining a few of the earliest known examples from around the world, we can see how sky knowledge was considered important to the functioning of the state whether it was *astrological knowledge in the service of good governance, or knowledge of bloodlines and relationships with the gods and other sky entities, which was used (B) - verdd