さえ

英文の添削お願いします。
中学2年生で、将来の夢についての英文です。

I want to be a science teacher.
It interesting for me to study science.
I have a respect person.
She is good at teaching science.
I want to teache science like her.
So,I want to be a science teacher.
I need to study more.
If I can be a science teacher,I want to teach everyone the fun of science