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h * [3] 次の英文は､森林伐採 (deforestation) が地球環境に与える影響に関してのレポートです。 英文 を読み、各問に答えなさい。 (*印の語(句) は注を参考にすること) * The World Resources Institute (WRI) says the world lost 4.2 million hectares (of forest)land) (in 2020) The total area affected was(about the size of The Netherlands.) The loss of forest) (in 2020) was a 12 percent increase over 2019. オランダ How does deforestation affect climate? Climate change both causes forest loss, or deforestation, and is caused by deforestation Scientists warn that climate change creates hotter and drier climates. (18) a result, forests are more *vulnerable to fire and damaging insects. Plants are also important because they take(in CO2 that causes climate change cause 23 Rod Taylor is head(of WRT's forest program.) He said forests hold large amounts of CO2)and that losing them has serious effects ( 19 ) *biodiversity and the climate. *The International Monetary Fund says that the world economy dropped by about 3.5 percent) (in 2020) because of the COVID-19 pandemic. But deforestation continued to increase. The WRI かもしれない(可能性がある) says this was possible because lockdowns limited governments' ability to create laws @ ) forest loss People may have also moved out of cities(into local areas.) However, the strongest effects (of COVID-19)( ) forest loss) are probably still to come. WRI researcher Frances Seymour said: "It's possible that governments will try to restart their economies (on the backs) (of forests." Areas (near *the Earth's equator) lost a total of 12.2 million hectares) of forest(in ※形で等しい平等なという意味も持つ。 2020) This loss released the amount (of gas equal(( 20 ) 570 million cars). That is more than ² → [20¹5 equal to ~ 2" ME TEXT ★形前の(時間的、順序的) two times the number of cars on the roads in the United States.) Brazil saw the largest decrease (in forests) The 1.7 million hectares lost was a 25 percent increase (from the previous year.) There was some good news. Indonesia slowed its rate (of deforestation by 17 percent in 2020. Palm oil, a vegetable oil, is a leading driver (of deforestation) Last year, the price of palm oil) decreased, possibly affecting deforestation in Indonesia. (@) addition, experts say/the that are stopping forest loss after damaging fires in 2015) *

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[2] Superbugs are *1strains of bacteria that are resistant to several types of antibiotics. Each year these drug-resistant bacteria infect more than two million people nationwide and kill at 23,000, according to the U.S. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC). 1 [3] Antibiotics are among the most commonly prescribed drugs for people. Antibiotics are effective against bacterial infections, such as *2strep throat, some types of *3pneumonia, eye infections, and

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2 次の英文を読み、 設問に答えなさい。 Although many people think it is a modern phenomenon, , distance learning has been around for at least 200 years in one form or another. Historical examples of long-distance learning include students being sent a series of weekly lessons by mail. The technological advances of the past 20 or so years, however, have meant that this form of education is now a credible to face-to-face learning. Indeed, 1996 the saw establishment of the world's first “virtual university” in the United States, showing how far distance learning has come in a relatively short space of time. While it is now possible to obtain a large variety of online degrees,

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