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Task 1 Read the ad below. Underline the qualities that Jenna is looking for in a roommate. NEED A RESPONSIBLE ROOMMATE I'm a 20-year old female history student at CUNY. I'm looking for a tidy and friendly roommate to share a two-bedroom apartment near the university. The apartment has furniture, Internet, and cable TV. We'll share a bathroom and a living room. The available bedroom is large. The rent is $300 a month. The perfect roommate would also be a student. I have a small dog, so you have to like dogs. I also can't take any other pets. If you are a smoker, you MUST smoke on the balcony. I get along well with creative and knowledgeable people. I'm pretty talkative and would be happy to live with a similar person. Please send me an e-mail (jennabusybee@cunyemail.edu) and tell me about yourself. I would like to hear about your studies, personality, and why you would make a good roommate. Jenna Task 2 (00 Write an e-mail to Jenna (80-120 words). Tell her about yourself. The phrases below may help. responsible tidy knowageable pay the rent on time/clean up after myself all the time / know a lot of things / like to have a good conversation/your own description カンバセイション Creative, friendly TITELK

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1 トレーナー 広告 You are a trainer. Read the ad and think about how you can help Dan. Write some notes on the right. WANTED: Personal Trainer I'm looking for someone to help me lose weight. I also want to get back (46) in shape again, I'm so busy that I can't make time for exercise. I haven't exercised in a few years and I'm really packing on the pounds. I need somebody to motivate me. Do you have any advice? The job is part-time, three days a week. You can contact me by e-mail at dan@sterlingarcher.com. I'm looking forward to hearing from you! Dan I Why are you the best? I've been a trainer for 5 years and am familiar with diets. How will you change his diet and exercise program? e eat food that are high in protein. • walk (0 minutes every day on an empty stomach Avoid fried food eat something that fills you up 腹もらいいもの Task 2 Reply to Dan's ad (80-120 words). Include some of the words and phrases below. concentrate on nutrition / go on a diet / low in fat / small portions / current weight / get daily exercise/ work out at home/accompany / take a run in the park

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以下の英文を読んで、その内容を英語で要約し, 解答欄に記入しなさい。 語数の目安は45語~55語です。 解答は, 解答用紙のB面にある英文要約解答欄に書きなさい。 なお, 解答欄の外 に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が英文の要約になっていないと判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることが あります。 英文をよく読んでから答えてください。 University students often plan for their future careers by attending job fairs or searching online for information about different kinds of work opportunities. There are other ways, too. Some of them choose to join short-term work programs at companies called internships. These have some good points. Students will be able to know more about companies they are interested in, such as what kind of jobs there are and what kind of people are working there. Also, internships allow students to get to know other students. These students can encourage each other both during and after the internship. On the other hand, if students choose to join very short internships, they may not be able to understand the job they are doing before the internships end. Also, students who take part in internships may find it difficult to do well in their studies.