大至急！ 英検2級2024第2回のライティングです。 採点・添削をお願いします。 採点→各16点満点(内容4点、構成4点、語彙4点、文法4点) 写真が横向きで見ずらかったり、語数調整で文章が見にくくなってしまい本当にすみません😣💦

No. DATE [4] Some of university, students: choose to join Joing T internships. has benefis, such as being able to know more about companies; and encouraging each other both during and after the it. On the other hand, they may not be able to understand the job. or may find it difficult to do well in their studies. 55 I

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英語です。 二枚目の文法を使って動詞を変形させる問題です。 一問目はわかったのですが、そのほかがわからなかったので教えてください🙏

Grammar A police officer is looking for a thief who stole a jewel from a shop last night. Miku Suspects Harry shop clerk Ms. Smith shop clerk 2 Mr. Sato shop owner security guard *suspect *. witness Witnesses to the Crime I'm not sure whether the thief was a man or a woman. The person had light-colored hair. Last night, I saw a person wearing glasses coming out of the shop. A few minutes later, the alarm went off. I saw a person running out of the shop at around 9 o'clock. I was talking with the shop owner, Ms. Smith, at that time. *thief E crime, light-colored, alarm, go off Q1. Complete the police officer's report. Use the words below in the correct form. [ commit / have / see / know ]umbs Asolarpotenz •stole only the most expensive jewel in the shop. The thief....seemed I have " had the key to the shop. ⚫turned off the security cameras beforehand. appears (2 )( "Known ) the details of the shop. My boss and I are (3 )( ) the most suspicious person tomorrow. We are sure of '5(4 ) the crime. *commit ~犯罪など) を犯す, beforehand 事前に, suspicious 疑わし Q2. Get into pairs and ask each other the questions below. (1) According to the witnesses' hints, who seems to have stolen the jewel? Choose one the suspects. Mr. Smith Sato (2) Why is he/she the most suspicious? Because s seems to have stolen the jewel. Key Points for Expressing (➡p. ① 述語動詞よりも前の時を表したいとき 同じ時 to have done / having done を用いる。 to be → seem to have done ｢~だった [した]ようだ」 予定・義務可能 意図 運命を表したいとき be to do 「~することになっている 〈予定〉」 「~しなければならない 〈義務〉」 「~することができる <可能> 「~するつもりである 〈意図〉」 「~する運命にある〈運命〉」

1枚目の写真のTask1を参考に Task2でメールの返信を考える問題です🙇‍♀️ 2枚目に私が書いたものがあるので文法や単語ミスがないか添削してほしいです 3枚目に評価する時に先生がよく見てるところを貼ってるので参考にしていただけると幸いです すみませんがよろしくお願いし... 続きを読む

Task 1 Read the ad below. Underline the qualities that Jenna is looking for in a roommate. NEED A RESPONSIBLE ROOMMATE I'm a 20-year old female history student at CUNY. I'm looking for a tidy and friendly roommate to share a two-bedroom apartment near the university. The apartment has furniture, Internet, and cable TV. We'll share a bathroom and a living room. The available bedroom is large. The rent is $300 a month. The perfect roommate would also be a student. I have a small dog, so you have to like dogs. I also can't take any other pets. If you are a smoker, you MUST smoke on the balcony. I get along well with creative and knowledgeable people. I'm pretty talkative and would be happy to live with a similar person. Please send me an e-mail (jennabusybee@cunyemail.edu) and tell me about yourself. I would like to hear about your studies, personality, and why you would make a good roommate. Jenna Task 2 (00 Write an e-mail to Jenna (80-120 words). Tell her about yourself. The phrases below may help. responsible tidy knowageable pay the rent on time/clean up after myself all the time / know a lot of things / like to have a good conversation/your own description カンバセイション Creative, friendly TITELK

1枚目の写真のTask1を参考に Task2でメールの返信を考える問題です🙇‍♀️ 2枚目に私が書いたものがあるので文法や単語ミスがないか添削してほしいです 3枚目に評価する時に先生がよく見てるところを貼ってるので参考にしていただけると幸いです すみませんがよろしくお願いし... 続きを読む

1 トレーナー 広告 You are a trainer. Read the ad and think about how you can help Dan. Write some notes on the right. WANTED: Personal Trainer I'm looking for someone to help me lose weight. I also want to get back (46) in shape again, I'm so busy that I can't make time for exercise. I haven't exercised in a few years and I'm really packing on the pounds. I need somebody to motivate me. Do you have any advice? The job is part-time, three days a week. You can contact me by e-mail at dan@sterlingarcher.com. I'm looking forward to hearing from you! Dan I Why are you the best? I've been a trainer for 5 years and am familiar with diets. How will you change his diet and exercise program? e eat food that are high in protein. • walk (0 minutes every day on an empty stomach Avoid fried food eat something that fills you up 腹もらいいもの Task 2 Reply to Dan's ad (80-120 words). Include some of the words and phrases below. concentrate on nutrition / go on a diet / low in fat / small portions / current weight / get daily exercise/ work out at home/accompany / take a run in the park

１枚目の写真のTask1を参考にTask2でメールの返信を考える問題です。 ２枚目に私が書いたものがあるので文法や単語ミスがないか添削してほしいです🙇‍♀️ ３枚目に評価する時に先生がよく見てるところを貼ってるので参考にしていただけると幸いです すみませんがよろしくお願い... 続きを読む

Task 1 Read the announcement below and take some notes. Attention all Students! G A study abroad scholarship is available Kla 011273 for next year. It will cover fees and $12,000 in living expenses each year for 27012-2016 HE のどこの大学でも a two-year course at any university in 001873 ひがみかく the U.S. Students can apply by writing a letter to introduce themselves. The letter will include: 1. Why they need the scholarship pay for my tuition here. Why do you need the money? 478401 ↑ I barely have enough money to 1. 2. I'm concerned about running up too Support myse (How much. many) debt デット How will you use the money? 1. rent groceries 2. The deadline is June 23rd. 2. How they plan to use the money しめきり 3. transportation Task 2 Write a letter applying for the scholarship (80-120 words). Use some of the words and phrases in th box below. barely have enough money/ concerned about / running up debt / keep a tight budget / necessities/ rent/groceries/transportation

これにS(主語),V(動詞)をつけてくれませんか。😭😭

READING Tly man 西洋の玄関ドアと日本の玄関ドアの違いは? CD1 11~13 13 11 I have been interested in doors for many years. 12 The front doors in Western countries open inward. But in Japan most of them open outward. Why do Japanese doors open outward and Western doors open inward? Have you ever thought about this? invite A young Japanese architect gave me an interesting answer to this 5 question. He said, "In Western countries, people open the doors inward to ite others into their houses. When you open the door outward, visitors many years we na have been have to move away from the door. In Japan, for using sliding doors. Even now, many old Japanese houses still have sliding front doors. When we started to use Western doors in Japan, we had to open 10 ebem blog 01, djiw Snow, them outward. You know, in Japan we take off our shoes when we go into our houses. If we try to open the front door inward, what will happen to all those shoes? We open the door outward to make a place for our shoes." Our way of living has changed the doors in Japan. They are only doors, but they are part of Japanese culture. Us 15 918 y9dT (t)

急ぎです！！🥹🥹 この2枚の写真にS、Vをつけて欲しいです！前置詞➕名詞には(かっこ)をつけてほしいです！ (付けれたらでいいんですけどもし、c.oもつけれたらつけて欲しいです🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️) 主語や動詞がどれなのか見極める方法などあれば教えて欲しいです🙂‍↕️😥

02 READING 2050年の世界はどうなっているでしょうか。 CD1 01-03 very Will life be the same or will it be 01 Let's think (of life in 2050. different from ours? Some scientists say that we will have no oil by 2050. We use a lot of oil every day, don't we? If we continue to use a lot of oil as 続く we do today, we will need much more oil for everyone in the world. The people in developing countries who don't need much oil today will want to use 5 it to have a better life. ② Take cars, for example. Now there are about 600 million cars in the world. Many of them are in developed countries. But the people in some developing countries also want to have cars to change their way of life. They will have more cars and begin to use them soon. How much more oil will we 10 need in the future? 03 ⑤ It is very important to know about the world's energy problem and to start doing something now. Jova 受 ers alod 高9(税白) 8

空欄の所が全然分からないです また、埋まっているところもあっているか確認してもらいたいです🙇🏻‍♀️՞ 出来れば明日の朝までにお願いします

<確認しよう> Lesson 2: Let's Have a Healthy Workout *意味が区切れる箇所で「/」 を入れ、文が終わる箇所では、「/」 を入れています。 1 の英文 a wide range of people (range: 範囲、 領域、 幅 幅広い層の人々 3 の英文 Some of them の them は何を指す? many people S V 1 DIn Japan / strength training was not so popular before, but now it is enjoyed / C 5 4 の英文 why はもちろん何? 関係副詞 S by a wide range of people. // ②Many people have begun training their muscles / for health and 0 beauty.// ③Some of them are posting photos and videos of their training / on social media.// 0 2 ④A reason why strength training has become popularis/ that its medical benefits have S ✓ これは文法で何と呼ばれますか。 Without muscles を書き換えると ★日本語訳をきちんとノートに書いておこう! 8 の英文 play はどういう意味? (ヒント:play a role ) この質問に対する答えを3つ挙げてください。 10 の英文 Without muscles, you could not walk/ or even stand. S become clear. ⑤ Since the 1990s, / research on muscles has revealed/ that moderate strength S V S training promotes health// ⑥After the age of 30, / people's muscles become 3 to 8 percent S 14 の英文 S S smaller / every decade.// ⑦Strength training can address this problem.// c 3 ⑧What role do muscles play / in your body? // ⑨First,/ muscles move your body. // ⑩0 munches play 0 S V 0 Moreover, / muscles move your S V Without muscles/ you could not walk / or even stand. // S V② heart and stomach/ without your conscious control // In addition,/ muscles help to create 0 S V.00 heat/ and maintain body temperature. // About 60 percent of the heat // your body produces ②⑥用法 ✓副用法 / comes from muscles. V Be careful not to exercise too much. 下線部を訳せる?→ノートに書いておこうか 運動しないこと V 0 15 の英文 It is said that 節 訳せる? 17 の英文 分詞構文と捉えていいかもしれません。 When doing strength training, When when と doing の間に何が省略されていますか。 doing_ →仮主語 both A and B の意味は AとBの両方 4 14 Be careful not to exercise too much.// 15it is said that too much exercise will weaken vCe 専門的 research h muscles your immune system. doing strength training, S ⑩6 You may easily catch a cold/ just after hard training. /// When S about you need to consider / both the quantity and the quality of your ~について ~に関して onのほうがaboutよりも専門的 B. 用法 分詞構文はその表す意味があいまいなことが多いので、はっきりさせるために分詞の 前に接続詞をつけることがあります。 接続詞 exercise.//

①赤いマーカーで引いてある部分（3箇所）の文構造 ②2枚目の写真の赤く囲んであるtoについて訳し方、用法等 ③2枚目の写真の、赤いアンダーラインが引いてあるin existanceの訳し方等 以上の３つを解説いただきたいです🙇たくさんすみません💦よろしくお願いします🙏

Note: This is not a word-for-word transcript. Neil Hello. This is 6 Minute English from BBC Learning English. I'm Neil. Beth And I'm Beth. Neil Shhh! Quiet please! I'm trying to read here, Beth! Beth Oh, excuse me! I didn't know this was a library. Neil Well, what exactly is a library? Have you ever thought about that? Beth Well, somewhere with lots of books I suppose, where you go to read or study. Neil A symbol of knowledge and learning, a place to keep warm in the winter, or somewhere to murder victims in a crime novel: libraries can be all of these things, and more. Beth In this programme, we'll be looking into the hidden life of the library, including one of the most famous, the Great Library of Alexandria, founded in ancient Egypt in around 285 BCE. And as usual, we'll be learning some useful new vocabulary, and doing it all in a whisper so as not to disturb anyone! Neil Glad to hear it! But before we get out our library cards, I have a question for you, Beth. Founded in 1973 in central London, the British Library is one of the largest libraries in the world, containing around 200 million books. But which of the following can be found on its shelves. Is it: a) the earliest known printing of the Bible? b) the first edition of The Times' newspaper from 1788? or, c) the original manuscripts of the Harry Potter books? Beth I'II guess it's the first edition of the famous British newspaper, 'The Times'. Neil OK, Beth, I'll reveal the answer at the end of the programme. Libraries mean different things to different people, so who better to ask than someone who has written the book on it, literally. Professor Andrew Pettegree is the author of a new book, 'A Fragile History of the Library'. Here he explains what a library means to him to BBC Radio 3 programme, Art & Ideas: Andrew Pettegree Well, in my view, a library is any collection of books which is deliberately put together by its owner or patron. So, in the 15th century a library can be 30 manuscripts painfully put together during the course of a lifetime, or it can be two shelves of paperbacks in your home. Beth Andrew defines a library as any collection of books someone has intentionally built up. This could be as simple as a few paperbacks, cheap books with a cover made of thick paper.