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【1C】 全文を構造把握して下線部を訳せ。 [AS] Our idea of time being a collection of minutes, each of which must be filled で S V with some business or amusement, is quite unfamiliar to *the Greeks. For the man who lives in a pre-industrial world, time moves at a slow and easy pace; *he does not care about each minute, for he has not been made aware of the (B) existence of minutes. * the Greeks : ギリシャ人 (ここでは古代ギリシャ人のこと) he: ギリシャ人

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en mm 思考 166 地層と対比 次の文章を読み,以下の各問いに答えよ。 For 堆積物は層状に積み重なって地層を形成する。 同じような堆積物からなる1枚の地層を (ア)といい,その上下の層との境界面を(イ)という。地層は下位から上位に重な って形成されることから,下位の地層は上位の地層より古い。 これを(ウ)の法則とい ウイリアム・スミスはこの考えを用いて, 1815年にイギリス全体の地質図を完成させ た。また,石炭の資源探査を行い,その過程で,同じ化石が産出する地層は同じ時代であ るという(エ)の法則も確立した。 ( 下図は,離れたX地域,Y地域, Z地域における地層 (A層~D層, E層~H層,および J層~M層)の重なりを示している。太い実線はそれぞれの地層から採集された化石の種 ①~⑤の産出範囲を示したものである。 各地層のVVV のマークは火山灰層を意味し,そ の放射年代は一致している。 このような地層は対比に役立つので(オ)と呼ばれる。そ れぞれの地層は連続して堆積している。しかし,X地域のC層とD層の境界だけは侵食面 となっており,D層はC層と異なる傾きを示している。 このような地層の重なり方を (カ)という。 X ttb tot Y ithtat Z ttb to 地層 化石種の産出範囲 えよ。 地層 化石種の産出範囲 E層 地層 化石種の産出範囲 A層 VVVVVVVV VV 種⑨ J層 VVVVVVVV VV F層 VVVVV V V V V K層 B層 C層 種③ 種① 種② 一種① 種 1 L層 0 0 G層 種③ 運 える 運 も より たま すわ 小さ レ 。 第5章 生物の変遷と地球環境 D層 M層 H層 |種 ① (1)文章中の空欄(ア)~(カ)に適する語を答えよ。 種② (2) 下線部にあてはまらない場合もある。 下線部にあてはまると考えられるものを,次の ① ~ ④ のうちから1つ選べ。 ①地層が逆断層でずれている ②地層が激しい褶曲を受けて倒れている ③不整合面の上に基底礫岩がある ④上部ほど堆積物の粒子が大きい単層がみられる (S) (3) X地域のB層に対比できるのはどの層か。図のE層~H層,J層~M層のうちから, 最も適するものを1つ選べ。 ( -A (A) (4) X地域のC層とD層の間で侵食された地層に対比できる可能性があるのは,どの地層 か。 図のE層~H層, J層~M層のうちから,適するものをすべて選べ。 (5)図の化石の種①~⑤のうち,示準化石として最も適しているものを選び,記号で答え (17 福岡大 改) 9. 地図と化石 135

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ercises US []内の語句を適切な位置に入れ, 全文を書きなさい。 下線部の動詞は現在分詞か過去分詞に 変えること A 1. The tourists from Spain stayed at the hotel. [stand on the hill] 3. He made a poster. [support the Japanese team] 2. I could not solve the problems. [confuse] 4. I really love the photo. [take in Australia] 5. Last night I watched a movie on TV. [move] TW S booze Jauj )内の語を並べかえて, 英文を完成させなさい。 下線部の動詞は適当な形に変えること。 1. (lock/she / that/kept / door ). 2. (fill/she/joy/looked / with ). 3. (walking/listen/I/was/to/music). 4.I (play/guitar/found/him/the on the street. 5. He (surround/stood / his/by/dogs). 5 次の英語を日本語に直しなさい。 C 1. Jenny had her hat blown off by the wind. bia palleol 2. I will have my house repaired before the party next weekend. 3. She felt her shoulder tapped in the crowded train. 4. He saw the tourists surrounded by the wild animals. 5. The students tried to make themselves heard when they got lost in the mountain. 6. I heard our dog barking in the garden. 1. 留学は私にとってわくわくするものだった。 4 日本語に合うように、分詞を用いて下線部に適切な語句を補いなさい。 総合 Studying abroad to mo for me. bilor allt gatod aid mott nighut of $ of 2. 子どもたちは歌いながらやって来た。 The children 3. 生徒たちは自分の本を閉じたままにしていた。 The students 4.その教師は30分間生徒たちを立たせたままにしておいた。 The teacher for 30 minutes. 5.ここがクリスマスパーティーのために予約された部屋だ。 This is for the Christmas party. 6.この公園では,鳥が鳴いているのがしばしば聞こえてきます。 Write! We often in this park. 1. 自分の身の回りのものや地元の特産品などを「これは~で作られている…です」と いう形で 営載て扱 B

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15 語数: 398 語 出題校 法政大 5 We are already aware that our every move online is tracked and analyzed. But you 2-53 couldn't have known how much Facebook can learn about you from the smallest of social interactions - a 'like'*. (1) Researchers from the University of Cambridge designed (2) a simple machine-learning 2-54 system to predict Facebook users' personal information based solely on which pages they had liked. E "We were completely surprised by the accuracy of the predictions," says Michael 2-55 Kosinski, lead researcher of the project. Kosinski and colleagues built the system by scanning likes for a sample of 58,000 volunteers, and matching them up with other 10 profile details such as age, gender, and relationship status. They also matched up those likes with the results of personality and intelligence tests the volunteers had taken. The team then used their model to make predictions about other volunteers, based solely on their likes. The system can distinguish between the profiles of black and white Facebook users, 15 getting it right 95 percent of the time. It was also 90 percent accurate in separating males and females, Democrats and Republicans. Personality traits like openness and intelligence were also estimated based on likes, and were as accurate in some areas as a standard personality test designed for the task. Mixing what a user likes with many kinds of other data from their real-life activities could improve these predictions even more. 20 Voting records, utility bills and marriage records are already being added to Facebook's database, where they are easier to analyze. Facebook recently partnered with offline data companies, which all collect this kind of information. This move will allow even deeper insights into the behavior of the web users. 25 30 (3) - Sarah Downey, a lawyer and analyst with a privacy technology company, foresees insurers using the information gained by Facebook to help them identify risky customers, and perhaps charge them with higher fees. But there are potential benefits for users, too. Kosinski suggests that Facebook could end up as an online locker for your personal information, releasing your profiles at your command to help you with career planning. Downey says the research is the first solid example of the kinds of insights that can be made through Facebook. "This study is a great example of how the little things you do online show so much about you,” she says. "You might not remember liking things, " but Facebook remembers and (4) it all adds up.", * a 'like': フェイスブック上で個人の好みを表示する機能。 日本語版のフェイスブックでは「いいね!」 と表記される。 2-56 2-57 2-58 36

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Lesson 5 Nobody's Perfect Summary: Scene 4 Fill in the following blanks. After the game, Galarraga went to see umpire Joyce, ①( who ) was sitting ( (onely) and feeling very sad. Joyce said he was sorry, and Galarraga kindly > gave him a hug. He told Joyce, “It's all right. Nobody's perfect." The nex day, Joyce worked ④( as Galarraga came to home plate to ⑤(exchange) lineup cards (instead) of th manager. When they ⑦( shook ) hands, Joyce cried. The fans saw this and starte ) the home plate umpire. Before the game started ⑩( (cheeng loudly. It was a ⑨( ), and good sportsmanship. ) moment that showed kindness,

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Grammar A police officer is looking for a thief who stole a jewel from a shop last night. Miku Suspects Harry shop clerk Ms. Smith shop clerk 2 Mr. Sato shop owner security guard *suspect *. witness Witnesses to the Crime I'm not sure whether the thief was a man or a woman. The person had light-colored hair. Last night, I saw a person wearing glasses coming out of the shop. A few minutes later, the alarm went off. I saw a person running out of the shop at around 9 o'clock. I was talking with the shop owner, Ms. Smith, at that time. *thief E crime, light-colored, alarm, go off Q1. Complete the police officer's report. Use the words below in the correct form. [ commit / have / see / know ]umbs Asolarpotenz •stole only the most expensive jewel in the shop. The thief....seemed I have " had the key to the shop. ⚫turned off the security cameras beforehand. appears (2 )( "Known ) the details of the shop. My boss and I are (3 )( ) the most suspicious person tomorrow. We are sure of '5(4 ) the crime. *commit ~犯罪など) を犯す, beforehand 事前に, suspicious 疑わし Q2. Get into pairs and ask each other the questions below. (1) According to the witnesses' hints, who seems to have stolen the jewel? Choose one the suspects. Mr. Smith Sato (2) Why is he/she the most suspicious? Because s seems to have stolen the jewel. Key Points for Expressing (➡p. ① 述語動詞よりも前の時を表したいとき 同じ時 to have done / having done を用いる。 to be → seem to have done ｢~だった [した]ようだ」 予定・義務可能 意図 運命を表したいとき be to do 「~することになっている 〈予定〉」 「~しなければならない 〈義務〉」 「~することができる <可能> 「~するつもりである 〈意図〉」 「~する運命にある〈運命〉」