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Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

TOEFLの誤りをひとつ選択する問題です。37の答えはCなのですが、正しく直すとどうなるかがわかりません…どなたか教えてください🙏

35. Electric lamps came into widespread use during the eariy 1000 replaced once-popular type of fat, gas, or oil lamps for almost every purpose. A B C D 36. Located in Canada, the Columbia Icefield covers area of 120 square miles and is B A 3,300 feet thick in some places. TviO 2oie abaoob C D 37. Composer Richard Rodgers and lyricist Oscar Hammerstein II brought to the musical allivieM oecmnoH A Oklahoma! extensive musical and theatrical backgrounds as well as familiar with the C d B traditional forms of operetta and musical comedy. D aha 38. Although traditional fiutes are among the world's oldest musical instruments, but the 0 09nel B tong To yodmt odt of bosh A flute used in orchestras today is one of the most technically sophisticated. C D 10oeo to auoilim abnid boeoleyo is te ybd ondes 39. Rice, which it still forms the staple diet of much of the world"'s population, grows B A nd aue best in hot, wet lands.

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10-2 Expressing the Past: Necessity, Advisability, Expectation PRESENT:(a) Julia has to get a visa. (b) Julia has got to get a visa. (c) Julia must get a visa. Past necessity: had to In (d): had to needed to: Julia needed to get a visa. There is no other past form for must (when it rmeans neceasity) or have got to. PAST: (d) Julia had to get a visa. PRESENT:(e) I should study for the test. I want to Past advisability: pass it. (f) lought to study for the test. (g) T had better study for the test. should have ought to have + past participle In the past, should is more common than ought to. The past form of had better (had better have) is almost never used. PAST: Ifailed the test. (h) Ishould have studied for it. (i) lought to have studied for it. (i) I shouldn't have gone to the movies the night before. The meaning in (h) and (i): Studying was a good idea, but 1 didn't do it. I made a mistake. The meaning in (j): It was a bad idea to go to the movies. I made a mistake. Usual pronunciation of should have: “should-ev" or “should-e." lao was/were supposed to: unfulfilled expectation or obligation in the past PRESENT:(k) We are supposed to leave now. PAST: (1) We were supposed toleave last week. PRESENT:(m)The mail should be here. Should have + past participle: past expectation The speaker expected something to happen%; it may or may not have occurred, as in (n).. PAST: (n) The mail should have been here by now.

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can take a rest on this day. New Year's Day is like a national holiday, because almost all shops and restaurants are closed. Japanese people are often said to be overworked, however, they can relax on this day. Secondly, it is a good chance to set up your own goals for the new year. When I

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