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九州大理系前期 14 2016年度 英語 Q5. In your opinion, what are some advantages if men and women can choose their career paths without being influenced by gender stereotypes? Write a brief essay in English consisting of around 100 words. [4] 次の文章の下線部(1), (2)を英語で表現しなさい。 (22

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Revising I think Is it important to attend university? Why or why not? Write a 60-90-word essay. 100 attend university Word Count: very fun and it is important reasons for my opinion. First, students can make a lot of friends at university. Studying with their friends is very good chance. to gain ability to students. communicate with people. Because there are many from various place at university, They can gain knowledge of various culture. + Se cond major in. in is Career For these reasons. To ・ 102 I have students can. study subjects which they want to I think that studying things which I am interestedt university makes student? studying at Also, decides their lives. I think people go to university. Two people should

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次のTopic について、自分の意見とその理由を50 語程度の英文で書きなさい。 Topic :If you had an "Anywhere Door", where would you go? Topic 2: If you could travel in a time machine, when would you go to? Topic 3: Do you think more people will have pets in the future? 55 ☺ If I could travel in a time machine, I want to go to Heian Period. I have two reasons. First. I can watch Helankya. Sei Shenagon and Murasaki Shikibu. I like their essay. so I want to talk with them. For this reason. I want to go to Helan Period 54歳 0 If I had an Second. I want to meet "Anywhere Door", I want to go to Shizuoka. I have two reasons. First I want to eat Local gourment food like Fuzimiya-yakicabo, Second I want to watch the volley match of Hamamatushugakusha high school. But I haven't enough many to ge So I want to go to Shizuoka with anywhere door. ☺ I think more people will have pets in the future. It's because having And having pets make children's pets is good for education. emotions enriching. Also, pet helps relieve children's loneliness. So I think more people will have pete in the future Check! □自分の意見や考えを最初に述べているか。 □その理由を述べているか 理由に対する具体的な事例・事実を述べているか ( つなぎ言葉を効果的に使っているか。 □単語・文法の誤りはないか。 ) words

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BAJAX- • Write an essay on the given TOPIC. • Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. 4 • Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words • Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of you answer sheet. Any writing outside the space will not be graded. epion TOPICsoria-algte is refpee poltron € 189 Is it beneficial for workers to change jobs often? of yllutoisa netail.l Resche Come back to Speak with his secretary, om POINTS Career goals CO • Motivation • The economy Working conditions The $1169 brachtibotliwon2 I obind or awond vloed o2 S dagnakap masligouldauechubserleri Kain a theq I ok

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小学校でオンライン授業を実施すべきか、対面授業を実施すべきか。 I think that elementary schools had better face-to-face classes. than reasons. First face to face classes give to talk with others This opportunities leads to make communication ability friends and learns It important for dementary students to know that there people who have thinking different from me through Conversation face to face classes -taking online lessons at home should continue to to Second students need to + give Go online lessons for Date hold for the following chances outside to are face-to-four lessons a fo to it is better for their health than go Therefore, elementary schools before.

文法問題で誤っているものを選ぶのですがどれが正解か分からないので教えて頂きたいです。

<誤っているものを1つ> (a) This is the house my father lived in his childhood. (b) She broke her leg the day she got married. (c) The essay you thought was written by Tim was in fact written by me.

"How did you feel”が答えですが "How were you feeing”ではいけない理由を教えてください。

次の英文は、中学生の健(Ken) と ALT(外国語指導助手)のジャック (Jack) の対話です。 これを読み、次の問いに答えなさい。 ('16 和歌山県 ) Jack: Hello, Ken. How are you? Ken: I'm tired. I finished my homework late last night. Jack: What was your homework? Ken: It was an English essay. My English teacher, Mr. Tanaka, told me to write an essay about my winter vacation. It was very hard. I needed some advice to write sentences. Jack: I see. I can give you some advice. Have you ever kept a diary? Ken Yes. I keep a diary in Japanese. Jack: That's good. Then, why don't you keep a diary in English? Your writing skills will become better. Ken : I don't think I can! Keeping a diary in English takes a lot of time. Jack: Really? Then tell me what you did last Sunday. Ken Well.... I went fishing with my father and caught five fish. Jack: ( when you caught them? Ken: I felt very happy. They were big and my mother cooked them at home. Jack: Great! You should write that story in English. You can write about things you did. It's also important to write about your feelings in your diary. It sounds difficult at first, but you can write a few sentences every day. Ken It'll be difficult for me to write English sentences every day. But I'll try. Jack: If you have a problem, I'll help you. du Ken Thank you, Jack. I'll write about my feelings in my diary in English. Jack: Good. I think you can do it! (E) late < essay f E advice sentence keep a diary 日記をつけている kept <keep why don't you ~? ~してはどうですか skill go fishing 魚釣りに行く feeling diary B busigamuti opot caught < catch (つかまえる) の過去形 対話の流れに合うように, 文中の〔 Call und 〕にふさわしい表現を考えて、 英語で書きなさい

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I disagree that Big companies u have a positive effect on society. I have two reasons. I 4 the environment to producet Large-scale products. Big company mode a lot of products , so they use maturials such as water, electric and gos@ Also, they discharge carbou dioxide. By doing so, global warming will be increasing. Seally worker is difficult to protect @ Nork-life balance. Big companies ask them for many job iro home go they will go @ a at late night. Also some poode have to move their house for working. They will lose their free time, and tell.. tired. Therefore, big companien have a lot of pod points. I think people should work widdle or small companies than big companies, and goople will C C

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シャーペンで印のついているhaveの働きを教えてください。 完了形だったらhelpが過去分詞になると思うのですが、 よろしくお願いします。

Model Essay 2F 名詞を修飾する ② 将来, ロボットが行うと思われることがいくつかあります。 第一に, ロボットにお年寄りの介護を手伝ってもらうでしょう。 ロボットはカ 強く, お年寄りの日々の介助ができます。 第二に, 農家の代わり に十分である をするロボットを入手するでしょう。 そのようなロボットは日本の 労働力不足を補う助けとなるでしょう。 There are a few things that I think robots will do in the future. Firstly, we will have robots help us take care of the elderly. Robots are powerful enough to assist them in daily care. Secondly, we will get robots which can take the place of farmers. Such robots will help to make up for Japan's labor shortage. (57 words) [ OXO コ