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Date No Topic Topic: Do componies need to improve the way they treat their wates? | think Companies need to impreve the way they treat their workers. - I have twe reasens to support my opinion in termns of health and Salaries. Fist. Companies shauld adeiisate their workers' health. 2 If workers have an illnes and canmot wack esily, a lot. of. (2 Companies wald be Coniesed to manage. Companies need to do 経営こど?) health check for workne health. It is good for (o Companies and I Workers to check halth. I think this is an adrontage each other. 12 Second, Cormpanies have to raise salaries, Some Workers de not lc be paid salaries for extra tasks, They will be very ticed and ? have an illes, It is not good for them fo work hard. 12 For these reasons, Companies have (mprove the wey they treat their workers.

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Date No. Tapi Age or disageei People will stop subscribing to peinted. news papers in the fuature. I agre with the idea that peoplewill stop sulkstibing to printed newspapers in the tiature. I have two reasens to support my opinion. Fist it is Good for the envirenment to reduce paper. Many peaple who read nenspagers take away them they have read, s0 quantity of geboge inaease. On the other hand online news does not make garbage Also, people carn read and bring Dnline nens easier then newspapers Secand, peaple can read wlatest news on online news. Newspapers' nems is the doj's news too, but they are not latest hews, However, online news provides new news any time. It makes our lives Comvenient. It is for these reasons L think that readers of newspaper will disapear in the frnure

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