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Date No. Topic: Do you think thatJapan, is a good Countey tor peagple with' children to live 'in? I do not think that Japan is a god Coanty fr peaple with children to live in. I have two reasons to support my opinion in Terms of Cost and lacking of doy care. Fist parents need much money to raise their childien. For exomple, there are meal_Costs and school tuition. 食安 They high school's Cast are free in Japan, baut high school ondumivecity are higher then we expect. Elemertay sechol and jurice Cost a lot of maney Itis had fr pareats to pay. Seund, the number of bath parents wmerting is increase there doys. 天働き So they have no time for dey caren If parents use a kindergaden, they Could not ue it because many kindergardens Cannat acept. There is he adult to see children. For these reasns, it is not good for people with children to lie in Jopon. (142 wordr)

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Dat ici Agre or disagree Elderly pegle Should be taken core of by their rather than sent to nursing homes I agre with the idea that elderly pesple should be taken Cae of by their tailies rater fhen Seat to nursingg homes, I have Two reasons To suport may opinjon in Tecms of better core and financial burdon r on family. Fist, families con be berer core than nursing homes because they know abart elderly faily members mme. If nuring homes tale Care of elderly pople,they con not be the best support. L It is easy for families to take care of them. Secondi Senting to nursing hemes Cost mare. If eldery paple are taken core of by nursing home s, thair families have to pay charge. It is difficat to pay high fee. for these reasons, elderly people should be taken care of hot y neriag homes but by their foniliea

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英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。 Points Curriculum Globalization Pressure on students Quality of teaching

Date No. lopic: Agre or disage: High school education in Japan needs to be ingroved with the idea that high school education in Japan needs agree to be improved. I hare twe reasens to support my opinion Tn terms of curiculun and glebalizatign. Fist. high schooleducation shauld change because Seciety in Jpan is shiting For exaasle, science techndogy improves mare thse deys,. 11 So Students iill get along with them in the fataure Therefore. they should study abast sicnce technelogy such as pogroning a and robots, Second, studants heve to Communicate foreigners becauce the number of oppes that. they Comect To forignare increases recertly. for eromple, people in Japen work with them, Student need not ony Ernglish skille bat alo acknonlager abant foreign Countries' culture. For these reasons, high school education in Japan hare to think about Curicatum and globalization To improve

英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。 Points Construction costs Effect local people Spending by visitors The environment

Date No. Topic: Is it a good idea tar local govegnments to build touist sires, Such as theme parks and museums? I think it is nota good idea for local (3 governments to build touriT sites, sach as theme parks and museums. I have two reasons 7 to support my opinion in fems of construction Costs and the envinanmant. fist, bilding taurist sites Cost alot. For erample, local garernents shodd buy vast soil To bild taurist sies. Maay loal (6 govemments do net have rmuch raeonty because they have a lot of a things to 'de for local peple, so it is diffi ault to bil tourist sites. (2 Secende it is not good for the environment. If tourist sits are bilt, the envionmert would be boken down such as 破増さんら deferestation. I think proterting the_ environment is more inportant ? than building tarist sites. For these reasons, local goverments should not build tovist sites. la a

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Date No. Topic: Agre or disage : Lite in Japan is becoming more strertal I dsagee with the idea that lüfe in Japan is becaming more strest.l. I have two rensons to support my opinion in terms of househald applianes and health Firt, hausehold appliances are becaming more usetul so Our lives will be convenient. for erample, there is an auto cleaner. We do not have to clean aurselves because auo cleaners can clean theicelves. Thanks to them, we can have free time a to rest. 2 Secnd hedty focd is increosing these doys, s0 the nunber of peple have an illnes decrease. If we have an illness, we will not die e medical Technelogy is better than pact. It is goad for us to live Commericanly. becans 3 For these resons, life in Japan is not becoming. more stresstal.

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Date No. Topic: Do you to fural areas after retirement? think that it is beneticial to move from urban cities I de not think it is beneficial to move from urban cities p nural areas affer retirement. I have two reasorns to support my opinion in terms of corvenience and isolation. Fist, urben Life is more Convenient than raral Life. a For example, we can buy things what we want immediately (0 because there are. many stores near our house, Also. there are. 17 a lot of trains lines, so wrban plople are enable to (テ go eaythae Second. urban ife is hot iselation, If we live rural areas, 1 we wnuld not be saved by other pegple when a catastoraphy Occers, I think Some buildings built at urban area are. satey (1 than rural area's brilding. For these reasons, I think moving fom urban cities to rural areas is pot beneficial. 126words Ch

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