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+ in their studies. [5] It is said that famous tourist sites, should limit the number of visitors. I agree with this opinion. I have two reasons why I think so. 31 First, It can protect nature. If the number of them decreases, garbages will be increased by th them, and as a result, the place's charm will become bad. Second, they saves a lot of time. This is because they don't have to wait there for a long time, and by doing so they will have a good time. For these reasons that I mentioned, す I believe that famous tourist sites, The number of visitors. ・98 57 •should limit

英語の長文です。 文法表現のあるところが知りたいです。 よろしくお願いします。

UNIT 1 5 Reading Passage 10 15 20 20 25 Listening There are more than 37,000 known species of spiders in the world in a wide variety of shape's and sizes! The largest spiders in the world live in the rain forests of South America and are known by the people who live there as the "bird-eating spiders." These spiders can grow up to 28 centimeters in length- about the size of a dinner plate, and, as their name suggests, have been known to eat small birds. In comparison, the smallest species of spider in the world is native to Western Samoa. These tiny spiders are less than half a millimeter long — about the size of a period on this page and live in plants that grow on mountain rocks. - Some people like to keep spiders as pets, particularly tarantulas, which are native to North America and can live for up to twenty-five years, Most people, on the other hand, do not like touching spiders, and a significant number of people are afraid of them, mainly because of their poison. However, despite their bad reputation, only thirty of the 37,000 known species of spiders are deadly to humans. Spiders actually provide benefits to humans, by catching and eating harmful insects such as flies and mosquitoes. - - The main thing that makes spiders different from other animals is that they spin web's to catch the small insects they feed on. The unique silk of a spider's web is produced by special organs found spider web is five times in the lower part of the spider's body. It is light, elastic, and strong stronger than steel. Additionally, it is completely biodegradable. This means that the web will making it perfect for uses completely decompose¹ and eventually return to nature over time such as making fishing nets. Some people have tried to raise spiders commercially in order to collect the silk these spiders produce, but no one has ever really managed to make a go of it. One reason why these businesses never stand a chance is because it takes 670,000 spiders to produce half a kilogram of silk, and all of these spiders need living insects for their food. In addition, spiders are usually solitary² animals, and need to be kept alone. Researchers at an American company working together with two U.S. universities may have found a solution to making artificial spider web. Using genetically modified silkworms,³ the company hopes that in the long run it will be able to make large quantities of very light, very strong fiber for medical as well as other uses. Additionally, because the manufacture of the artificial web is from living silkworms, the industry potentially would be non-polluting and less harmful to the environment

至急！！ 英検二級のライティングをどなたか添削して頂けないでしょうか！どうかお願いします！また、この文だと何割ぐらい取れそうかも教えて頂けると嬉しいです🙇 補足　×This essay will have → ⚪︎This essay will explai... Read More

TOPIC Today in Japan, many buildings and public areas have a lot of lights for decoration, such as the lights used during Christmas. Do you think this is a good idea? POINTS • Safety • The environment • Tourism

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問題 3 以下の英文を読んで、次の問いに答えなさい。 (*のついた語には語注が ある。) If you are able to step outside and hear many types of birds, you might also have a greater feeling of well-being. Two studies show that hearing diverse birdsongs may help increase our happiness. (A) One study was done by researchers at California Polytechnic State University. A research team studied the effects of birdsong ( 1 ) people walking through a park in the U.S. state of Colorado. A biology graduate student, Danielle Ferraro, led the study. "There could be an evolutionary reason why we like birdsong so much. And the idea is that when we hear birdsong it could signal safety to us," Ferraro says. There could be many other reasons, too. Ferraro states that in some areas around the world birdsong can also signal the arrival of spring and nice weather. Bird diversity, she adds, can also mean a healthy environment. She explained her study to Voice of America (VOA). Ferraro and her team played recorded songs from a diverse group of birds native to the area. They did this on hiking trails in a park in Boulder, Colorado. (2) several weeks, the researchers played recorded birdsong at certain times of the day and other times they did not. Then they talked with hikers after they ( 3 ). Hikers who heard the recorded diverse birdsongs reported a greater sense of well-being than the people who heard simply the natural birds. The researchers suggest that both the bird sounds and biodiversity* can increase feelings of well-being. Ferraro explained that she used native birdsong for the study. This way it would sound as natural as possible. They also did the study during the summer. She explains why this is important. "So the study ( 4 ) in the summer and that's kind of important because the spring is most birds' breeding* season. And if we play the birdsong during breeding season, that might have disturbed them. (B) We didn't want to disturb the birds too much." The study was published in an academic journal called the Royal Society B in December 2020. - 10- ◇M2 (310-15)

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英語 7 次の英文を読み、1から4の ちから一つずつ選びなさい｡ 解答番号は 内に入れるのに最も適当なものを,それぞれ①~④のう 27 O others. 24 Nagisa was a nurse who was working in Zimbabwe, a country in Africa. One day, she got an email from her old high school homeroom teacher, Mr. Tamai. He wanted to ask was hesitant at first because she always had a fear of public speaking, she felt this would be a Nagisa to give his students a talk about what she was doing in Zimbabwe. Although Nagisa good chance to tell students about the joy of working abroad and helping people in need. The next time Nagisa went back to Japan, she visited Mr. Tamai's high school to speak with his students. She was very nervous, but to her relief, the students seemed to be very interested in her story. She talked about her job, her reasons for working in Zimbabwe, and both some good and bad things about working there. She shared her passion for helping After the talk, one of the students came to talk to Nagisa. He said, "I would like to work abroad and help people in the future like you, but I don't know what kind of job I would be able to do. Do you have any advice for me?" Nagisa said, "I think, doing something you like is the key. Keep doing it, and doors will open for you." (Ten years later) One sunny day, a group of Japanese farmers visited the village where Nagisa was living. They came to teach local people how to grow plants and vegetables. People in the village were eager to learn from them. Then, the youngest member of the farmers' group came to talk to Nagisa and said, "Hi, do you remember me? You gave a talk at my school ten years. ago. At that time, I liked growing plants and vegetables, but I didn't know how to use that to help others. You told me to keep doing what I liked and that has really opened doors for me to do what I'm doing now. Thank you." Hearing his words, Nagisa recognized who the young man was. She was surprised and pleased that her talk from ten years before was able to make a difference in this young man's life. 1 Nagisa was 24 a high school teacher. 2 afraid of public speaking. 3 scared of living abroad. 4 a doctor in Zimbabwe. 4 2 One thing Nagisa told Mr. Tamai's students was why she chose to work in Zimbabwe. how she learned a new language. 3 when she went to a high school in Africa. 4 what she did to impress local people. 3 One of the students said he wanted G (2) (3 to be a kind nurse like Nagisa. to teach Japanese culture in Africa. to open doors for other people. to help people overseas. 26 3 25 4 Ten years after her talk, Nagisa 27 made an appointment to meet one of her old friends in Africa. 2 became a farmer and taught local people how to grow vegetables. met one of Mr. Tamai's students again. 4 4 gave a small talk in her high school again.

一枚目　長文 二枚目　問い 三枚目　答え この問いで色々と疑問点がありしつもんしました。 ①一枚目の付箋（上の）に書いていますがservethemselvesが再帰代名詞になるらしいんですけど訳し方が不明です。 ②一枚目の付箋（下の）に書いていますが緑色の斜線で囲んだ... Read More

serve themselve) i Reading 速読問題 次の英文を2.5分で読んで, 1. の問いに答えなさい。 訳の drau 目標 20分 (he) A new *retail concept was introduced in the United States when the first self-service "grocery store named Piggly Wiggly/opened in 1916// Before that, customers used to starframent. bring a shopping list to a neighborhood store and wait while a store clerk collected the items they wanted and measured out products like *flour and rice from large 一方で新しい containers. On the other hand, Piggly Wiggly gave customers baskets and asked (容器) (2) を…の状態で出す くて食べ物] them to serve themselves. They filled their baskets with packets of flour and rice, TE shelf 複数形 (食料品) (棚) cans of vegetables, and other groceries from the store's shelves.. BIRG stocenes from the souhogo を (3)Sales at Piggly Wiggly tog of ondo JB9Tg в Beim J'mol (一般的に) typically bought more when they *made their own selections. 18 15 were higher than at other adow ow: Jeal lliw sIBE odT x (42-=) anel hiny-neque euiq email easly ams 10 expanded to become a chain of stores, and other markets copied the self-service (拡張する) (まねする) (Copy)id behoo (4) Writi model. The modern supermarket was born. ¹ retail [rí:teil]: 9 make a selection : er stores, because customers I& rado nol esmeni ingi 0212 di betuoosi - labom jealsi eril of egneriaxe ens.] It influenced not only the way people shopped but also other aspects of the food 2 grocery store # 12 aspect [æspekt] : wilsop-deid bat0qml ( CAN-DO List (製造会社) a'sibns? vol. business. For example, food manufacturers started using more attractive packaging (6710) Teunitnoo elsa erti lliw gnol wol Soon Piggly Wiggly in order to draw customers to their products. 19dor to bus odi is gainn (168 words) LET muvola Ikan Ce yebir azon Ion] D 4 flour [fláuǝr]: d boy mo lan <知識・技能〉第4文型, 第5文型について理解できる。 <思考力・判断力・表現力〉 近代的なスーパーマーケット esanal juodliw soment bathoml 1.

一枚目　長文 二枚目　問い 三枚目　答え この問いで色々と疑問点がありしつもんしました。 ①一枚目の付箋（上の）に書いていますがservethemselvesが再帰代名詞になるらしいんですけど訳し方が不明です。 ②一枚目の付箋（下の）に書いていますが緑色の斜線で囲んだ... Read More

serve themselve) i Reading 速読問題 次の英文を2.5分で読んで, 1. の問いに答えなさい。 訳の drau 目標 20分 (he) A new *retail concept was introduced in the United States when the first self-service "grocery store named Piggly Wiggly/opened in 1916// Before that, customers used to starframent. bring a shopping list to a neighborhood store and wait while a store clerk collected the items they wanted and measured out products like *flour and rice from large 一方で新しい containers. On the other hand, Piggly Wiggly gave customers baskets and asked (容器) (2) を…の状態で出す くて食べ物] them to serve themselves. They filled their baskets with packets of flour and rice, TE shelf 複数形 (食料品) (棚) cans of vegetables, and other groceries from the store's shelves.. BIRG stocenes from the souhogo を (3)Sales at Piggly Wiggly tog of ondo JB9Tg в Beim J'mol (一般的に) typically bought more when they *made their own selections. 18 15 were higher than at other adow ow: Jeal lliw sIBE odT x (42-=) anel hiny-neque euiq email easly ams 10 expanded to become a chain of stores, and other markets copied the self-service (拡張する) (まねする) (Copy)id behoo (4) Writi model. The modern supermarket was born. ¹ retail [rí:teil]: 9 make a selection : er stores, because customers I& rado nol esmeni ingi 0212 di betuoosi - labom jealsi eril of egneriaxe ens.] It influenced not only the way people shopped but also other aspects of the food 2 grocery store # 12 aspect [æspekt] : wilsop-deid bat0qml ( CAN-DO List (製造会社) a'sibns? vol. business. For example, food manufacturers started using more attractive packaging (6710) Teunitnoo elsa erti lliw gnol wol Soon Piggly Wiggly in order to draw customers to their products. 19dor to bus odi is gainn (168 words) LET muvola Ikan Ce yebir azon Ion] D 4 flour [fláuǝr]: d boy mo lan <知識・技能〉第4文型, 第5文型について理解できる。 <思考力・判断力・表現力〉 近代的なスーパーマーケット esanal juodliw soment bathoml 1.

英語の文法についてに質問です。 一と二枚目の緑の蛍光ペンのところの文法が合っているか確認していただきたいです。　 三枚目に参考資料を載せてあります。 お願いします🙇‍♂️

CUTTING EDGE 1-05 絶滅危惧種の選定 Have you ever heard of the "quagga"? Perhaps not, but you may have seen a zebra before. (1)The zebra is a horse-like animal with 形M distinctive black and white stripes covering its body. The quagga was a member of the zebra family, brownish in colour with white stripes FOS around the neck and the front part of the body. (2)It is often said that quagga looked like "zebra which had forgotten to put on their pajama trousers." Quaggas lived in Southern Africa, but they died out in the 19th century due to overhunting. We can now only see their wild beauty as 3stuffed specimens. Some researchers, however, have tried to "revive" the quagga. Because of its attractive stripe pattern, the quagga has gathered much attention from those interested in animal conservation. Those who would like to see the animals walk around the savannas again have conducted the Quagga Project for over thirty years in South Africa. Fas 模様のない (3)It turns out that the quagga is genetically close to the plains zebra. In this project, researchers have attempted to selectively breed plains zebras: they chose plains zebras which have fewer stripes and look slightly like quaggas. Baby zebras born to a slightly quagga- like mother and father may look more like the quagga, with a 13 significantly reduced number of stripes. (4)This project has achieved a certain level of success, producing several lovely baby zebras which have striking similarities [to ] the quagga. . However, should we be happy about this? (5)While this new generation of zebras is visually impressive, it only resembles [X]

問3について質問です。 当方、全くいい案が浮かばなかったのですが、皆さんがこのような英作文に当たったらどう対処しますか❓ 具体例としてはニホンカワウソやツシマヤマネコ、トキ、コウノトリが挙げられるようですが私はどの生き物も英語で書けません。(/ω＼*) ちなみに私はホ... Read More

次の英文を読み, 設問に答えなさい。 Jaguars had called the American Continents their home since the Ice Age when their ascendents crossed the Bering Land Bridge that once joined what is now Alaska and Russia. They lived in the central mountains of the southwestern United States for hundreds of years until they were almost driven to extinction in the mid- 20th century after hunters shot the last one in the 1960s. Currently, jaguars are found in 19 different countries. Several males have been observed in Arizona and New Mexico over the last 20 years, but breeding pairs have not been seen or reported north of Mexico. Natural reestablishment of them is also unlikely because of urbanization and the U.S.-Mexico border blocking jaguar migration routes. Now, after more than a 50-year absence, conservation scientists are suggesting the jaguar's return to their native environment in a study that outlines what the rewilding effort may look like. The authors of the new paper suggest a suitable area for jaguars spanning 2 million acres from central Arizona to New Mexico. The space would provide a big enough range for 90 to 150 jaguars, the researchers explained. They also argued that bringing jaguars back to the U.S. is crucial to species conservation as they are listed as near-threatened on the IUCN Red List, and reintroduction could also help restore native ecosystems, the Associated Press reports. "The jaguar lived in these mountains long before Americans did. If done

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2 空所に入れる言葉として最も適切な適当なものを選びなさい。 Columbus's name appears many times on maps of the Western Several cities in the U.S.A. are named after him, ( ) is the Colombia River, one of the chief rivers in the U.S.A. and Canada. Hemisphere. X the Western Hemisphere **) 1 which 2. it 3 as 4. that