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下線部クの次のaccess〜のとこの訳が2枚目のカッコのとこだと思うんですけど、そこの「なかなかない」という訳がどこからきているかを教えてください

Mulky Today we live largely cut off from this spectacle, with smog and light pollution *obscuring our view of this *perpetual cosmic drama, the unfolding of which once seemed intimately connected to questions of both natural and social order. But if we want to see Mars as it appeared ancient humans, access to a clear night sky is only half of our problem. We also have to put ourselves in their minds. (ク) to (キ) [ 1 ] We have seen the surface of the Sun, the landscapes of Mars, the

下線部クの次のaccess〜の部分の訳で澄み切った空がなかなかない、という訳はどこからきているのか教えてください

thousand stars (カ) Milky Way galaxy, and the planets slowly making Today we live largely cut off from this spectacle, with smog and light pollution *obscuring our view of this *perpetual cosmic drama, the unfolding of which once seemed intimately connected to questions of both natural and social order. But if we want to see Mars as it appeared ancient humans, access to a clear night (ク) (キャ sky is only half of our problem. We also have to put ourselves in their minds. [ 1 ] We have seen the surface of the Sun, the landscapes of Mars, the atmospheres of Venus and even Jupiter. We've discovered moons around other planets, and have found icy ocean worlds among them. We've used modern physics (to *infer the existence of black holes, and have now even "seen" them (with powerful radio telescopes.) We know that stars are bright orbs powered by *thermonuclear fusion. We know that within the observable universe, many billions of them (a septillion, in fact, with twenty-four zeros) are packed into 170

これにS(主語),V(動詞)をつけてくれませんか😭😭

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日曜日に英検の2級を受けます。 要約の自己採点が私には難しいので、採点して欲しいです。🙏 【School Uniforms】 School uniforms are clothes that all students wear to school. They make t... Read More

h These days, most Japanese middle and high scools make. them wear school uniforms. Harring school uniforms has benefits, by doing this As Students and parents can less things to worry, such as. comparing their clothes, and deciding what to wear to school. Sant However, they have problems. For example, school uniforms may be not liked by everyout and. They feel stressful.

英検二級ライティングの要約問題を採点してください！ 回答：These days, some university students choose to join short-term. By doing so, they can know about companies ... Read More

以下の英文を読んで、その内容を英語で要約し, 解答欄に記入しなさい。 語数の目安は45語~55語です。 解答は, 解答用紙のB面にある英文要約解答欄に書きなさい。 なお, 解答欄の外 に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が英文の要約になっていないと判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることが あります。 英文をよく読んでから答えてください。 University students often plan for their future careers by attending job fairs or searching online for information about different kinds of work opportunities. There are other ways, too. Some of them choose to join short-term work programs at companies called internships. These have some good points. Students will be able to know more about companies they are interested in, such as what kind of jobs there are and what kind of people are working there. Also, internships allow students to get to know other students. These students can encourage each other both during and after the internship. On the other hand, if students choose to join very short internships, they may not be able to understand the job they are doing before the internships end. Also, students who take part in internships may find it difficult to do well in their studies.

答えが合ってるか確認して欲しいです。 challengeの2は分かりませんでした。

4. (scòlded/ was / the teacher / who/bèing/by) in this room at that ume! 5. (be / the / going/is/moved/ cupboard to ). 6. (was/by/ kitten/rolled a ball / being/the) then. 5 次の英文を日本語に直しなさい。 に注目。 過去 進行形の受動 態。 5. cupboard 食器棚 6. kitten 子猫 1. Both English and French are spoken in Canada. to Tom mid bespele 1094 0 2. Many surveillance cameras are equipped in this building. 3. Parking is not allowed here. 4. Where were those cars manufactured? 5. This song used to be sung by young people. 2. surveillance camera 監視カメラ equip 設置する bhow'an 4. manufac 製造する BMOW blo 6. Your homework will have been done by tomorrow. 6. 未来 CHALLENGE! 次の日本語を英語に直しなさい。 ただし, 受動態を使うこと。)anoy 1. テレビは誰によって発明されたのですか。 (invent) 2. その犬は彼女によって飼われている。 3. その部屋は掃除されているところだ。 gt beveiled A ミスに注意! 下線部に誤りがあるものを選び, 訂正しなさい。 A strange message appeared while the software is being installed. (a). (b): (c). (d)

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I really feel sorry for you, hearing how your hands get cold and cracked because of the cold weather and water in winter. Whenever you use water, make sure you dry your hands and then rub them until they get warm. (December 11, 1944) This letter was written by Kuribayashi Tadamichi to his wife. He was a commander on Iwoto, a battlefield during World War II. He wrote many letters to her from there. Iwoto is a small flat island that lies 1,250 km south of Tokyo. One of the hardest battles between Japan and the US was fought there. The island was a very important place for both the US and Japan. For Japan, it was the last base to protect the mainland.